Date: October 16 2022 12:32 AM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period
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[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period
It is a pity that Mark cannot talk to Sarah. I think he would be able to change Sarah's thoughts a bit, she seems a bit insane when it comes to tiny men. There really should be a courthouse where people like Mark can make their case against people like Sarah. I think that would really help. Yes. Sarah seems like the caring kind of person.
Thank you for writing. It's a good story and every chapter is good and keeps me on edge for what will happen next.
Hopefully unitl next time!
Date: January 25 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period
Keen to see the present timeline storyline continue as soon as possible! Lots of great buildup and suspense for the end of the flight and a new phase of marks life. I really enjoyed sarah thinking of ideas to turn mark into the perfect insole as well as dianne's cluelessness about mark's entrapment. It's interesting to see Diannes perspective change but maybe it should never 100% convert like some other characters have?
Hopefully she continues to misread the situation and believes she is helping mark on his way to freedom by having him stuffed inside her thick hiking sock rather than Sarah's.
In terms of requests for the college characters perhaps Amoe could continue using her phone with Mark by dropping him on the sleeping body of Kelly and taking photos? Could be a chance to try new Tags like nose,ears,mouth. She could also do her own photoshoot with him, posing like he is a morsel of food.
Author's Response:
Hey daftpunk,
I'm also enjoying writing about the Dianne/Sarah dynamic. Hopefully i keep their characters intersting and believable, so i'm glad you are enjoying it.
In terms of the college stuff, there will be a few more chapters that i already have planned in terms of this meeting/party, and Amoe will be heavily featured along with a few other characters.
What i'm thinking of is a standalone event with one of these 7 girls, outside from the party/meeting we are still reading about. Again, no rush, feel free to let me know in another review.
In terms of your suggestion with Amoe - i already have an idea similar to that *possibly* in the works. I can't guarantee anything, as i kind of let these develop naturally, but we are thinking on a similar wavelength.