Date: January 15 2020 10:35 AM Title: Chapter X-23: Sarah's first time
Aww, I was hoping she would play the generous goddess for a while, to see when she would change her mind - too bad it was cut short.
Other than that, awesome work as usual.
I also believe you're the first author I see who gets a commission starting from his 1st story - congratulations!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
Sarah's had to start somewhere!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2020 8:04 AM Title: Chapter X-23: Sarah's first time
I am speechless... This was, by far, the best thing I have ever read on this site! It was beyond perfect. Characters like Sarah’s mom are my thing and you wrote it exceptionally well! Your writing is amazing. I can’t even describe it adequately. (Although, I do wish she had a name.)
The range of emotions I felt reading this chapter was something that doesn’t happen very often to me. I have reread this chapter about 4 times now, and it just gets me every time! I would kill for more chapters like this, or separate stories like it. I wish there was a star rating higher than 10!
Author's Response:
Wow. Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying it and it's always good to hear feedback.
As to the giantess with different politics thing - I agree. It's one of those silly little things that somehow adds a lot to the 'character' if you know what i mean.