Reviewer: Lexander Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2019 12:29 AM Title: Chapter X-18: The Meeting-The Party 3: Momma's baby boy

So I have had my eye on this story for a while now but had not taken the time to start reading it. I know I was going to like it by skimming it back then, but I could of never guess just how fantastic this story was going to be. Every portion of this story is engaging and entertaining while also being fluid. I never really know what's going to happen but whatever does feels completely natural. The number one thing I like about the Giantess fetish is inshoe entrapment and foot odor/musk. Making authors like FTfeet, Sheograth10 and duck12345 some of my favorites. You now being my latest favorite. 

I completely love every bit of him with Dianne and inside her shoe. I can't wait to see what happens with her and Sarah in that story arc. The Party in the backstory has been very entertaining so far. Linh's shoe hiding game being awesome, especially with him ending up is Stephanie's nasty grimy smelly sneakers.

I do think it would be awesome to see him trapped in one of Kelly's gym/workout shoes with her massive feet, while she goes out to work on that body he fell in love with. Maybe on the same day of the foot wedding if you follow through on his engagement. :) I do hope that Jen makes her way into the backstory with her name being teased throughout this story.

I look forward to seeing more of your incredible writing kenny224

Sincerely,

Lexander

 

Author's Response:

Hey Lexander!

Thanks! Being compared to other authors does mean a lot, i've definitely read some of their works and were certainly inspired by them.

 

In regards to Kelly, i'm not entirely sure, but i do have a loose ideas of her, so she's definitely still one of the major characters in the story.  What exactly will happen, I'm almost as uncertain as you.

 

In regards to Jen/Tracy.  I'm not quite sure.  To be honest, I had originally planned for both of these characters to be more or less frames of reference for Mark.  Both will be heavily discussed as an influence on our protaganist, giving him motivations and fears, but in some ways i feel like introducing them might take away from the some of the mythology and power of the character - kind of like Oz.

 

So at this point, i'm not leaning towards them both not really making an appearance in the story.  Especially Jen.  Perhaps I'll write an alternate story short story just for her, but that's a ways away, and hopefully, the story is compelling enough without her.

Anyway, feedback is welcome.  I appreciate it, thanks!