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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2019 6:54 AM Title: Chapter X-17: The Coffin

I think this is one of the more interesting stories to appear on this site.

The flashbacks give it a good balance between world building and torture.

But I do have to admit that there seems no lack of that in the world building chapters.

Thank you for writing! And I'm looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Yea I think the whole idea of using the flashbacks for pacing, kind of went out the window a bit - but it just seemed to work naturally for me. 

Even if they are a bit of a rollercoaster, there are should still be elements of worldbuilding in them - definitely have some stuff planned albiet i know it's not going to be anywhere near pacing lol

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