Reviewer: LostSoul Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 6:50 PM Title: Chapter X-16: The Meeting-The Party 2: Linh's Game

I'm not big on the whole foot aspect of giantess, but I love the level of detail, your descriptions (especially as it relates to their size difference), and the unaware (both to Mark's presence and the level of unintended torture they're giving the tinies).

 

Linh and Ani are my favorite with Amoe and Naru right behind them. I'm almost curious to see the other tinies' perspectives like David who's trapped in Ani's pink pocket and forgotten. Is he struggling because of lack of air? That's a long time to struggle from being dropped into the pocket from when Mark heard him screaming the second time.

 

All in all, the backstories have been my favorite!

Author's Response:

Hey LostSoul!

 

Thanks for the feedback.  I'm definitely not trying to be a total foot freak but, yea, it's what i'm into, so i can't promise anything. :p

 

As to other characters, i perhaps will go into them, but this is really a Mark centric story, with some asides for other "Character development"

 

in any case, glad you're enjoying it!