[Report This]Date: December 02 2019 4:16 PM Title: Chapter X-14: The Meeting - The Party
I swear you could have made a story just about this Meeting arc and it still would have been a good enough story on its own. But the fact that this is just a flashback to your main story is even crazier.
In case I wasn't clear, I still think you're doing a phenomenal job with this arc. The main characters of this chapter (Kelly, Naru, and Ani) are all great and the way they all playfully yet forcefully interacted with Mark while frequently underestimating their own strength was awesome to read. In a less unforgiving setting, this could be the start of a fun life for him.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hey Sheograth!
Thanks for the kind words. I've enjoyed this arc myself, and plan on continuing to explore it.
You and some of the others readers thoughts are definitely something i've considered and adapted to suit the story - thanks for the help as they say!
-kenny