Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 3:41 PM Title: Chapter X-10: The foot mine

Well, our tiny hero is deeply, permanently f---d at this point, but I'm loving the narrative so far, and the brief interludes. I'm very happy to suspend my disbelief that a stewardess's personal hygiene could decline so rapidly from 'good' to 'inner ring of hell', because wow is it fun to see him pay his way to freedom through the most abject kind of slavery. 

You're in the zone, right now, and this story has some nice energy to it. Really excited to see how you continue this. Hope it goes on for a while, and that you write some sequels or prequels. 

Author's Response:

Ha thanks!  Glad you like it!