Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2022 7:34 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In Flight Service - Part 2

Greetings Kenny,

 

Your writing style is very imaginative and fairly realistic, it could be enhanced by considering the feminine perspective.  While I am not an airline hostess, if I need to be on my feet, serving meals on a long flight, I would wear a pair of comfortable ballet flats with a 1/2 inch heel height.  A black leather upper will ensure a classic look, while a foam footbed will mold to my foot to ensure comfort.  The key point is that the shoes ought to be comfortable and nice-looking, so I would be able to do all the tasks during the long flight.

 

Therefore, perhaps it would be better if you include a description of her shoes.

 

 Tess  

Author's Response:

Hey Tess

Although they currently aren't in their flight attendant outfit anymore, your thoughts are noted!

Kenny

Reviewer: DarthDarthBinks Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2019 9:00 PM Title: Chapter X-4: In Flight Service - Part 2

Insole/being trapped in a giantess's high heel is one of my favorite macro scenarios , and to have a whole story dedicated to that is quite the treat. Great stuff so far, can't wait for the next chapter