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Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2024 4:49 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

Dear Kenny,

Currently, I’m writing a chapter from another angle, from the perspective of a male tiny within the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR).  It is a spinoff from “The Underfoot Railroad” via your works of fiction, which you’ve given me the go-ahead earlier.  

Preface - Since President Dianne Trent of the LSR has successfully drum up support for the propaganda that female individuals were being told repeatedly that they were victims of an oppressive male hierarchy.  Then, to right the supposed wrong of toxic masculinity, President Dianne Trent cleverly initiated the mandatory miniaturization process.  These days, all men have been shrunken to the height of merely three inches and all their civil rights have been put out of the ladies’ minds.  All the miniscule men are mass-produced synthetically.  Since they’re just synthetic products, men don’t have any identity whatsoever.  Hence, the tiny guy in this chapter will be named as ‘Nameless’.  The story resumes from the time when he saw the frightening episode as Winkie inadvertently stepped on another male tiny in the ladies' dressing room.    

Tess




Author's Response:

Hey Tess,

Of course, this work in itself is an inspiration from many others.   Your work is your work, but feel free to draw any elements from any work you find interesting.

But in any case, sounds interesting, I'll have to read it once it comes out.

Kenny

Reviewer: partyman678 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 5:40 PM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

it would be cool if diane decided to use mark like sarah had as an arch support within her own pair of flats during a flight 



Author's Response:

Hey Partyman,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In any case, in regards to you previous mentions, there will still be some more inshoe stuff in the story, but we are nearing the end, so no promises for anything!

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2022 2:40 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

Macrophilia is fascinating, I mainly focus on writing about the lesbian angle.  The trustful and caring perspectives are worthy of note, as some of the gentlemen might overlook these attributes.  For example, your comment on the idea of Tess (me) being nothing more than a device, used to check for hair stubbles was a loving, yet naughty act by Jessica.  She wouldn’t use my body to caress her legs unless I am truly her significant other.  Though, the folly was that her action inadvertently caused a distressing situation for me.


Regarding your brilliant story, perhaps you could make it a perpetual sequence of events.  For example, my story is based on the daily life of me and my social circle, which stimulated many ideas for my imaginary tale.  I read that you have the story planned out, if so, you might be adding a stumbling block to your creative writing.


Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2022 8:03 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

To begin with, I appreciate the in-depth descriptions of your chapters.  Actually, although I don’t have a feet obsession, I am captivated by the emotional feelings in your creative writing.  


In my works of fiction, I’ve integrated the various events of my daily life to make the narratives to be more true-to-life.  My friends often contribute to my writing by giving me their viewpoints.  And so, I’m able to persist with my imaginary tale.   In my story, I’ve been successfully shrunken to merely 7 cm (2.8 inches) tall.  Plus, I’ve the benefit of the Nano Intelligent Cells, while it won’t reduce the physical damage & pressure, it will stop the major blood loss.  This enhancement will significantly boost my survivability.


Humorously, my friend is a keen hiker, she asked me to write a chapter to describe a narrative of me being utilized as an extra arch support for her foot.   


Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2019 1:55 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

I'd love to be Diane's pet.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2019 2:37 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

Nice story so far

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