Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2019 11:24 PM Title: Chapter X-3: Onto the plane

This chapter was pretty incredible. I've often mused what it would really be like to be shrunken to a fraction of one's former size. And sealed away some place like this. Completely beyond the notice of all around. Never knowing if the next footfall of your captor would mark the end of your very existence. The fact that even with the best of intentions, Dianne is subjecting Mark to this kind of mental anguish, is pretty powerful. 

I find myself wondering what it was like for the previous people that she smuggled this way. If they had faired any better than Mark. Or if perhaps they had already met an untimely end before Dianne even got situated on the plane. Either which way, the part with her giving him water while he remained trapped is one of my favorites so far. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope the rest of the story is equally "entertaining" ;p