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Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2024 9:49 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

Many thanks for the valuable feedback.  I’ve been integrating the cultural/moral difference between the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) versus the Asiatic Nation (AN).  Apart from the cultural similarity that both nations are of a female dominant culture.  What's more, the AN has mastered the technology of artificial procreation, so it’s unnecessary to have any male citizen in the AN society. 

Grounded on your storyline, most of the LSR ladies wouldn’t consider any minuscule guy as homo sapiens.  Hence, all minuscule guys are merely consumable products, and this view has been moulded in the LSR’s culture.  In due course, Tess would meet Mark, and learn about his ordeal as a minuscule guy surviving in the LSR.  For the time being, I’ve written a new chapter to bring in the LSR cultural view regarding minuscule guys.  I opted to use an indirect approach by utilizing two Asiatic Nation characters being unsympathetic to the situation that there are frightened, minuscule escapees hiding/moving around in the LSR surroundings, and they merely become accustomed to the LSR ethos.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=40&textsize=3

Sincerely,

Tess


Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2024 8:35 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Dear Kenny,


I’ve written a few chapters on various scenarios when the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) team gathers with the Asiatic team.  I placed various subtle hints towards the cultural differences between the two nations.  For example, in the following chapter, I described the different viewpoints on the way that the LSR ladies would view miniscule guys as just a product, such as being used as shoe inserts.  While from the Asiatic nation’s perspective, miniscule ladies have equal rights.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&textsize=4&chapter=35


Please have a read & comment.


Tess


Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2024 5:59 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

So glad to see this story back! I re-read it all the time. 

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2023 7:26 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Please we need new stories kenny!! haha ._.



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuyy,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In any case, yea, the dolls seemed like a fun idea at first and then just became rather boring.   

Kenny

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2023 2:44 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

It is really nice to see you back! Cant wait to see more chapters, now that I know you are done with dolls stuff. Have you ever considered to create a spinoff  from this universe, lets say with a completely different characters, showing brother-sisters or father-daughters interactions?



Author's Response:

Hey Jurdzi,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In regards to your question, while i have thought about spin offs (and even written some stuff) i make absolutely no promises as i'm already having trouble writing now as it is.   And to be honest, those particular topics while I'm not completely against the idea isn't something that also particularly appeals to me, so I dont think it's something i'd be focusing on.     

I could mention some of my ideas but it feels wrong to dangle out a carrot i have no idea if i will be able to deliver, so i'll just leave it at that.

Kenny

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2022 2:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Couple of thoughts:

  • There is someone by name Jennifer (I think) mentioned thorought this story as she had been treating him horribly, until he ended up with Tracy. Are you planning to further introduce this character later on, or is it just a small hint of Marks past that you are not planning to exlore anymore?
  • I am surprised none of these college girls has any pantyhose on. It could make his intimate experience with their feets even more challeging.
  • I wish Amoe used some broom instead of a vacuum cleaner. Given her limited sight, she could have beaten a hell out of him without even noticing, while leaving him in some pile of dust. An honorable mention to a famous scene from Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie.
  • I would love to see Mark turned into an object with these college girls, just like he is presented as a shoe insert with Diane and Sarah. He could be a simple clothes or hair decoration, or perhaps a jewerly (ear ring, toe rigs, etc.) He was already tied up once by Crystal, so I hope there will be some more bondage. By other words, to continue dehuminizing him in the clutches of these wannaby friends.
  • Like I said in my previous comment, I would love to see more of Linh, and perhaps Kelly as well, given her size and indication that she would love to wear him as a good luck charm.

Great story, one of my all time favorites right away. I am sad I need to wait for every single chapter now that I finished what you have already posted. I hope you will find a peace and balance in your life that would allow you to not only finish this story, but also posting the remaining chapters on a regular basis.


CYA!



Author's Response:

Hey Jurdzi,


Glad you are liking the story! Here are some notes of mind in regards to your thoughts, in case you want some insight to what I'm thinking with this story.  So spoilers? i guess


*Jeniffer is not in scope for this story, and is just color and context for the story for now.  


*Now that you metnion it, I wish i had thought of panthouse, but alas.


*Again, broom is a great idea.


*Objectification is something i have thought about in the college girls story but as of now i dont have anything that meets that particular criteria specifically in this scope of the story.  It might end up being part of a bonus chapter, or another story at some point as i do have some storylines already outlines.  No promises on if and when that will ever happen though.


*I will consider Linh your "Vote" then for the bonus chapter!


Again, happy you are enjoying the story, and thanks for the kind words.


Kenny


Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2022 8:10 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Absolutely phenomenal work so far. Somehow, this story had been below my radar for a couple years. I should had known better!!! All these scenarios remind me of stories from Slipstream, especially a Slow Shrink Tale, my all time favorite. Endless humiliation combined with extreme details dedicated to each chapter. I am halfway thru and its been thrilling to read. 

I wish theres going to be a return of Linh in some point in time, either incorporated to a story and its natural development  or a couple of standalone chapters. I am not into any extreme violance or gore, and I am sure you are planning to keep our main protagonist alive thorought this story (even if barely), but its exciting to imagine what ways she would be pushing all these boundaries of humiliation and dominance herself. 

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2022 4:03 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Since you brought up your AI struggling due to censorship

Hit up openai, chatgpt is censored but the other one isn't. Even the censored one doesn't work that well against giantess content. I had it make a very decent story about a friend of mine accidentally crushing me in her shoe. 

I still recommend you make a discord or similar place for your fans to congregate at, though I understand if you aren't interested in that sort of thing 



Author's Response:

Yea the AI stuff interesting and unnerving at the same time.  I'd be lying if i said i didn't start playing with it again.  It seems like after the lobotomy the AI quickly relearned alot of of the old conversations, especially if you avoid any direct mention of anything vanilla sex related.

As to discord, perhaps.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2022 2:21 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport


Greetings Kenny,

I’ve sent an email to you.

Sincerely,

Theresa 


Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2022 7:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I'm feeling the same when the season of a show I really like ends and I have to wait 2 years until the new season ahahahha In the meantime I'm reading again, no rush, I just want to read a lot more about Dianne and Mark :D



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuy

Sorry, getting this out as fast as I can, believe me.   And sorry, not yet back on the Dianne storyline, perhaps the next update!

Anyway, glad your enjoying it!

Kenny

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Then my vote goes to more Amoe! Maybe even an alternate universe bonus chapter where Crystal doesn't stop her and she leaves the party with Mark underfoot >:)

Either way, amazing chapter as always! 



Author's Response:

No promises but Thank you!

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2022 4:02 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I’ve sent an email to
reply to your concern.  Please have a read.



Author's Response:

Hey Theresa,

Thank you once again for your comments.   I have left a comment on your story.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

I cordially invite you
to review our latest chapter.  Please
review, I am looking forward to get your feedback.

https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&textsize=3&chapter=34

Tess









 

Reviewer: Lexander Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 8:34 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Still is an absolutely amazing story that gets better with every addition you add to it. It's awesome that you are still writing this story with so many good authors on her getting burnt out. 

As for what I'd like to see in the bonus collage stories. I mainly was to see Mark experiencing Kelly's massive feet inside her Cleats or Skates during a Game or Practice session. 

Other than that; an inshoe session with a disgusting Ugg boot showcasing just how horrible to be trapped in a shoe that just pumps out Grim, Detritus, Sweat, Humidity, and wet dripping fussy fur that wants nothing more to entomb you in it forever. As for the girl for the Uggs, I don't have a preference other than Kelly being my favorite girl.



Author's Response:

Hey Lexander,

Thanks for the comment!

To be honest, I do really like these concepts you mention and have thought about them before.     If Kelly does win the bonus chapter, I can't guarantee anything in particular, but I will admit that (and this is well beyond the scope of the story) I do have what amounts to another story entirely just involving Mark's time in college with Kelly.  

Unfortunately, I am no way in a position to guarantee I will write any of this, as I can only promise that i will finish the scope of this story.   

So I dont know if that makes you feel better or worse - but yea.   I've thought along similar lines.   lol.

Kenny

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:00 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Another amazing chapter as always. I wonder what Amoe is up to at the current point in the story. I really like that she doesn't appear to be hateful or malicious. I hope that at some point she at least finds out what happened and that Mark does actually hate feet and is super traumatized. 


I'm still hoping for a happy ending haha, if any ending could be happy in such a setting. Regardless the path there has always been great and you are a master writer on this site. This is probably the greatest size story made, and your ability to put the horrors of being tiny to word is unmatched. I hope you recover from your burnout and if not that's more than okay because you've given us so much 



Author's Response:

Hey Wutt.

Thanks for the comment.

To clarify, Amoe is now asleep on the couch!   She had a pleasant night :) and yes, you are correct (at least in my mind and in the story currently, lol) Amoe is in no way malicious, but is just a bit clumsy and not very perceptive, which, apparently, can be quite dangerous for an inch tall person.


In any case, the story will "end" at some point.   Not sure what I'll be doing after that.  I'd like to have it done by the end of the year but it will probably be after that considering we are almost at November.   

Again, thanks for the kind words! Glad you are enjoying it.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2022 3:48 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

I cordially invite you to review our latest chapter.  Please review, I am looking forward to getting your feedback.

https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=33&textsize=3

Tess

 



Author's Response:

Hey Theresa,

Sorry for the late reply.  Just have been busy with everything and trying to focus on this story, tbh.   but i emailed you back and let you know in a review! 

Thanks again!

Kenny

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2022 3:26 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I vote for whatever has the highest chance of getting us more unaware >:)



Author's Response:

Hey Badguy!

That's not specific enough! :)

Off the top of my head, while unaware will probably be in all of the characters stories in some way (except perhaps Linh but dont take my word for, haha) the most likely unaware character stories are, by most to least likely:

Tier 1: Amoe and Stephanie.

Tier 2 :  Ani, Kelly, Naru, 

Tier 3: Crystal (perhaps Linh?)

Tier 4: Linh (although perhaps not

-Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2022 4:13 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

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I agree with wiedzmin3677. And I don't know how this story isn't in the Featured Stories on the site, simply the best!

Author's Response:

Hey TInyGuy,


Take this comment for your other posts as well.    I'll go in the order you posted them.

Firstly, Thanks, and glad to hear you are enjoying the story!

Second:  Yep, I also really enjoy the stories where the tiny is not a fan of what's happening.  Obviously stories in this manner are a very unserious and personal thing, but I do find that when characters who genuinely enjoy what's happening to them takes alot of the thrill away from the story, and also creates scenarios that are less believable.   Not that the story has to be realistic in anyway (mine certainly isn't that realistic even getting past the whole "being one inch tall" thing)  but from my perspective trying to at least somewhat consider how interactions would occur in a more realistic manner can go a long way into making the story more believable.  It's not punishment or scary if you enjoy it, so to say.


Third:  Thanks again.   I'm not worried about any rewards or accolades.  I'm writing this story for my own personal enjoyment as much as anything else; it's nice to see that some people like it.  I know not everyone will.

Reviewer: wiedzmin3677 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 3:31 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Unbelievable, never I would have guessed I would been reading a story of 300 thousands words, and yet here I am wishing the story to get to 600 thousand. Your writing is very addictive, I can’t describe how thankful I am to live in the era of J. R. R. Tolkien and kenny224. I wish you all the best my Friend, please don’t abandon the story ever, I can’t die without have seen some flashbacks of the live with Jen and the future of Mark living his ultimate nightmare in the sheepskin boots of Dianne for the rest of his life. 



Author's Response:

Hey Wiedzmin,

Wow comparing me to JRR Tolkien may be a bit too far but, hell, I appreciate it!   And yes, the story is not over quite yet but I don't want to get your hopes up either - I have a planned ending, and that's as far as I'll go with this story.   Perhaps i will write spin offs/short stories to do prequels and sequels or look at other aspects of society.   Hell, I'm not super concerned with the story being extremely consistent, not that it would be a problem as I could look at different states/countries at different time periods with different laws, so there is a lot of flexibility.    I definitely have a bunch of outlines for stories not within the confines of this one, and some of it is written out, so i may post that at some point as a sort of one off as well.  

 
But nope, story isn't abandoned.   Just slowly inching my way forward towards my goal.   Compared to how much I've written already, I dont think that much remains, but there will still be a decent chunk of content.


Kenny  

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2022 8:40 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I hope that when the story comes back there will be a lot of chapters hahaha



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuyy,

Sorry for not writing as much or as quickly, but unfortunately I've had some major issues come up in my life recently that have limited my time and ability to focus on something like this.  I'll be trying to write a bit more in the near future to hopefully make up for it and eventually finish this thing, lol.


To answer your question from another comment below, about Sarah.   Another author "Theresa Yuen" and I are going to do a collaboration https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324 (yes god only knows how much slower i will write now) and i finally sent an update (today)for it and my first contribution, so hopefully she will notice and update her story with it in the next few days.   It will not be entirely written by me, however, but it will be using that character, and it is adapted for Theresa's work so it won't necessarily include all the same elements from my story.  Hopefully you find that interesting.


Kenny

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