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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2021 1:46 AM Title: The nightmare

What a pleasant surprise to see an update from you! But, to end it with a cliffhanger?! I am an anxious guy! I need more, please! XD 

Reviewer: BigJames36 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2020 12:47 PM Title: The poolside

Lots of requests for unaware stuff. If that happens I hope mom or sister then become aware. I love the awkwardness after the realization of what has happened. Like when mom learns he was in her undies or sister finds him in her bra etc.



Author's Response:

Hah beleive me theres gonna be plenty of awkward moments for Jones

Reviewer: BigJames36 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2020 11:31 AM Title: The poolside

Love where this story is going. So glad to see an update, I had been trying to find this story a while back.

Reviewer: BigJames36 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2020 8:41 AM Title: The poolside

Really loved the chapter with mom and her playfulness. Would love to see her playfulness turn a little inappropriate influenced by some holiday drinks

Reviewer: Yolo224488 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2020 12:34 AM Title: The poolside

Love where this is going, very descriptive and fun to read. :)

Is it possible that there could be some unaware or aware insertion with the sister Lisa? :) :) :)

Author's Response:

There will be some unaware stuff but what kind they will be. Well you'll just have to stay tuned ;)

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2020 3:12 PM Title: The beach

What a pleasant way to start the year! Really happy you are continuing this story. The interaction with the mother was really good, liked the description and how playful Jessica showed to be. And I would love to see or tiny protagonist trapped in his sister flip flops kkkkkk. 

Thank you for keeping the good work and happy new year!



Author's Response:

Happy new year to you too! Im glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2019 7:34 AM Title: The nightmare

Good story so far. I hope that little Jones meets Isabella again and that they have a nice romantic love relationship with lots of cuddles and kisses.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. The future is unclear Jones could end up meeting the love of his life or the end of his life. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2019 4:39 AM Title: The nightmare

Interesting foreshadowing... Let's se how he will survive the ordeals that are to come.

The beach is a dangerous place. Maybe he will meet Valeria again. Or maybe Lisa is the one that ends up steping on him without realizing it.

 Thank you for sharing your story. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

The beach is a very dangerous place anything could happen hehe

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2019 10:17 AM Title: The nightmare

It's quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Also, I'm from Spain and I like you choose my country as the scenery for your story.



Author's Response:

I've visited Spain a few times and had tonnes of fun. So i thought it was the best place to do my story.

Reviewer: wireman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2019 8:27 AM Title: The poolside

Being a fan of shrink stories involving giant mothers and siblings I am loving this so far and can't wait to see where it goes. The unaware giant potential is something that I'm most excited about I can't wait to see if we get any more great unaware mum bits or sister bits.

The vore and incest tag was my reason for coming but though we haven't had much of them yet, I am not disappointed at all :D

Keep up the good work!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Im happy to see your enjoying things so far.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2019 7:53 PM Title: Close call

I loved everything. From Jones relation to his sister and mother, to the language problems and the giantess interactions. Please, more! I love gentle stories!!

Can't wait to see where you take this story.

Thank you and, again, please more!! XDD

 

PS. Sorry for any mispealing. I am fluent but english is not my primary language.

 



Author's Response:

Your spelling is great buddy I'm very glad you love the story so far. I intend to take this very far its gonna be a rough two weeks in spain for Jones.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2019 6:26 PM Title: The poolside

i hope he gets thrown in the toilet.

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2019 3:27 PM Title: The poolside

I love the language miscommunication and how the spanish giantesses don't know how intimidating they can be.
The mom character sounds like she would also make a great unaware giantess. She could come across jones exploring the bathroom because its connected to her room and try to stomp him, getting a tired lisa to help her.

I like the way you characterised lisa and how caring she is to her brother. His only communication to her is his phone so if he misplaces it he could be in for a world of hurt.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it the language was a little tricky but well worth it. 

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