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Reviewer: emshoshoshe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

very good

Reviewer: YoshAkou Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2021 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 7 is super good ! The possibilities with Michel's new size are cool.

You have excellent writing, good luck writing the rest :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback, hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoying this story a lot so far! The humiliation aspects are a lot of fun, particularly where he wakes up cuddling his sister's foot, and the mention of him unknowingly being the laughing stock of the school. 

My favourite part was the details of his sister's run, knowing that he'd have to lick her feet afterwards. Hope to see more of that, maybe something similar involving his mom too.

Please, keep writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I will try to follow your suggestions.

Reviewer: YoshAkou Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good story ! I look forward to the rest !

Good luck with writing :)



Author's Response:

I wrote already something more, feel free to suggest whatever you like!

Reviewer: johnbart37 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2019 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this. I always love the stern mother figure and bratty sister dynamic in these types of stories. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, you're an excellent writer!

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