[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 6:25 AM Title: Consummating
Great story, only wishing the bullying before and the interaction after Meredith got tamed would be described some more for the contrast. But i really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I had to short the description a bit to keep the story moving along at a good clip. They'll be back though, and he's not done getting bullied.
Date: October 21 2019 2:02 PM Title: Consummating
Now, I understand you have to make up for all that happened to the tiny guys in your other stories, but this is too much luck for a single person, I hope it's enough to make him burst ;)
Author's Response:
It's true what they say, some guys really do have all the luck!
Date: October 12 2019 1:23 AM Title: Consummating
Only just got around to commenting after I finished this a while ago, I enjoyed the nice change of pace in tone after a couple of darker stories that I had been reading. Meredith's belittiling attitude perfectly leverages our expectations, we're obviously well aware of what your giantesses are capable of :p MC's willing embrace of her is something we often see in slow shrinks where they can't help themselves but not as often in shorts like this so there isn't really time and space to develop him as an individual really. Only reason I bring it up is because i read you intend to have these two resurface, which prompted both the question of what you might do with him and it also invited the idea that Meredith might eventually learn to grow as some of your other characters do :D
A worthy story, my thanks for it!
Author's Response:
I appreciate you taking time to come back and review this!
Earlier I said that this idea hit me while I was working on Making the Grade: what if I did something with a similar concept, but a completely different arc? After reading this I realized I kind of inverted everything I've done going back to the very beginning! I have a couple ideas of what I want to do with them that I'll need to flesh out a bit before I can get to work, but I'll tease the ideas by saying that there's more than one bully in school, Meredith wants to go to a school dance "alone," and there'll be a crossover with one of my other characters. Unfortunately, I don't think she'll be growing, since character-wise she has no need; her tiny boyfriend makes her feel like a giantess already :)
[Report This]Date: October 05 2019 9:06 AM Title: Consummating
So sweet.. That Meredith, now everybody will know that she's Really NOT a 'Mean' Girl. how will she ever face everone back at school? ;)
Nice work. you we're really walking a tight-rope there in the first few chapters, I was hoping that you could hold on to it... and, you did an excellent prolong of the fascination between the two. Even with the secret coming out - she still didn't eat him! Lol!
Nice Work at blending their opposite personalities and bringing everything togehter so nicely!
I will have to check out the rest of your stories!
Author's Response:
She'll figure something out, she's a smart girl. There might be people who have something to say about it though ;)
Thank you! I've written enough stories where the shrunken person gets killed in some way at the end, I figured I could let them win one for a change.
As usual, I encourage everyone, but especially my new readers, to check out and review my other stuff when they can.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2019 1:58 PM Title: Consummating
Aww, these two are so cute. I'm almost sad the story ends here, but it's better to end on a high point I guess.
At the beginning of the story, didn't expect Meredith to be also kind of liking him back. I almost expected Meredith to simply suddenly decide to crush him. But the way things turned out is way better. Fact.
I now imagine Meredith as his huge guardian angel, ready to waltz over anyone that tries to bully him, because that's of course Merediths task.
I hope to see them back somewhere and I would also like to thank you again for writing the story!
Author's Response:
I got the idea for this while I was writing Making the Grade; I wanted to do something with a similar skeleton, but a totally different outcome.
I think you said it earlier, Meredith's claimed him now, and if anyone wants to bully him they have to deal with her first.
They'll definitely be back in a couple months, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2019 10:30 AM Title: Consummating
And that is the conclusion....of the first arc. I like how despite Meredith being a strong willed and confident woman she's still has a vulnerable side.. Also very Noble of our hero will go through whatever it takes to make it work with her. I look forward to seeing what the future holds.
Author's Response:
It's an extreme version of the truism that inside every bully is a scared, insecure person, really. The protagonist helps her feel strong, and now that he's there to hold her up she doesn't need to use violence quite as much.
As far as he knows she's the only person who can give him exactly what he wants, and he'd already walk through fire for her. Their future is going to be quite interesting.
[Report This]Date: October 03 2019 3:51 PM Title: Consummating
A surprisingly heartwarming story that has reached its finale all too soon. It does, however, showcase the advantages of write-it-before-you-publish-it approach.
All the best and keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Their story is far from over : ) I just didn't want this to become a bloated, never-ending slog, and that was as much as I had planned. They will definitely be featured in future stories, though they'll probably be shorter.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope what comes after lives up to this one for you.