Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter Three - Part II

I'm glad that they are sort of friends now but I got a few things to say.

It feels a bit off that she wants Daemon the most, is Daemon the most interesting of the group? Not really. I'd argue that was Grayson. Is Daemon the one that saved her life? Nope that was Trea that spoke up on her behalf. Does he make the best converstaion? Not from what I've seen, that was Ljos.

So why him? Because he was the first to come into her cave? It just sort of seems like she has this weird attachment to this specific human for no real reason. I GET that she wants a companion, that part makes sense.

Anyway, these are just small things I noticed, I really do like this story.