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Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2022 5:57 AM Title: Chapter One

Well, that was a cute story. 

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 8:43 AM Title: Chapter One

I love this story! I hope There is more Yvedawn and Daemon cute moments

And hopefully some romance? Hehehe they are cute together. 

I would like some more character building for daemon tho so ge can be just as cool as his (hopefully) soon to be girlfriend.  Lol

Sorry just my thought.

Amazing Story so far keep it coming! 

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter Three - Part II

I'm glad that they are sort of friends now but I got a few things to say.

It feels a bit off that she wants Daemon the most, is Daemon the most interesting of the group? Not really. I'd argue that was Grayson. Is Daemon the one that saved her life? Nope that was Trea that spoke up on her behalf. Does he make the best converstaion? Not from what I've seen, that was Ljos.

So why him? Because he was the first to come into her cave? It just sort of seems like she has this weird attachment to this specific human for no real reason. I GET that she wants a companion, that part makes sense.

Anyway, these are just small things I noticed, I really do like this story.

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter One

This story is positively adorable. This is the kind of stuff I come here to read. Thank you so much for writing this, I enjoyed it greatly and am looking forward to whatever chapters you write in the future. 

Reviewer: Marussia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Three - Part I

Awesome story!!! Thanks for helping make this story possible Mr. Nobody. I really like Yvedawn, I hope nothing bad happens to her. If I stumbled into that mountain’s cave I would drop the sack immediately and go and hug her leg and tell her that I would like to spend the rest of my life with her without a hint of fear in me

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter Three - Part I

Aww don't hurt Dragon waifu! She hasn't killed anyone. If not Daemon since it seems like he has zero interest in her then I'm sure someone out there would want to be her companion!

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 1:11 AM Title: Chapter One

Ahhh! No dont let the Dragon Sweetheart get hurt! Daemon Save her!

So you two can be together!  Shes lonely she wants someone to snuggle with! 

Reviewer: tank Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2019 3:48 PM Title: Chapter Two - Part II

I am really enjoying this story kind of want to see were this is going wondering if she will end up as a couple with the thief

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2019 4:06 AM Title: Chapter One

Awww...I Was really hoping her and Daemon were gone have some cute alone time. I hope they still do. They would make a cute couple 

Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter Two - Part II

Love this story! Dragon girl is so cute and adorable! Love her! And I love that one of her "treasures" is a hot archer woman. Hopefully she'll do some sexy stuff with her. Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: Saf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter One

Can't wait to see more! 

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter One

The start looks promising, though my view may be distorted owing to my long-time devotion to fantasy genre. "Endless" set the expectation bar for any new story coming from you suitably high, but I trust you will emerge victorious from this epic dance with a dragon.

C

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2019 11:03 AM Title: Chapter One

Aww, she's adorable! Still could kill a person easily, fire breath or no, so Daemon better watch out! But why didn't she follow him out? Maybe anxiety from being in there so long? Who knows.

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