Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sorry to hear that you have been having a hard time. I did like the last 2 chapters. Just some things that I noticed.

In chapter 4 it's mentioned that he hears the thunder of 6 gigantic sized kids rushing towards their mothers, but Celia only has 3 daughters by herself. Is there another gigantic mother with daughters in the area? Celia has a dildo sub that he can climb in, with a replica of her pussy that he can copulate with. But considering that she has advanced suits to protect him, even one that the beginning of chapter 5 hints is strong enough to pass through her digestive tract, him copulating with a replica of her genitals seems a little underwhelming considering she surely has protection suits that could allow him to explore the real thing without being crushed or smothered. He's the size of an ant to her so there's no hole or orifice in her midsection that's off limits to him should he go "cave exploring" and like an ant she can still feel him. He could explore her vagina and end up in her womb, explore her urethra and end up in her bladder, make love to her clit, and even explore her anus, without being crushed or suffocated.  

The openings of the chapters foreshadowing him being swallowed alive by his 1700 foot plus girlfriend are really good. I really like the intro to the fourth chapter where he contemplates the primal fear of being eaten alive, how since the rise of the gigantics mankind is forced to confront the fear of no longer being at the top of the food chain, and his pondering of whether it is worse to be eaten by something with a mind that's aware of you. I really love the introspection here, good writing. And to be fair that's what Celia is doing, she is eating him, but without the expectation of digesting him as he travels through her digestive tract.  

In the beginning of chapter 5, it mentions protective armor and Celia speaking to him as he prepares to fall into her stomach. I guess this means he does need a suit to travel through her digestive tract, and that she is aware and can communicate with him. He will also need a means to have her insides illuminated so he can see. I really hope that his trip through her digestive tract is full tour, that he passes in and out through the entire lenght of her digestive tract. Considering how little is known about the eating and internal digesting of gigantics he could even turn his trip through her as a documentary if Celia is okay with it. It would sure get a lot of views. Since she's apparently in contact with him she and presumably her daughters will be very interested and curious in checking in on him as he travels through her digestive system. It's been established that she drinks polluted water and can process plastics and heavy metals contaminating water, but does she eat solid organic garbage as well as metals and plastics? If so it would explain the armor he's wearing, and it must be quite scary and intimidating to see things like whole cars and buses being digested right in front of him in a stomach the size of a small arena. It will be interesting to see how her intestines convert it into waste from the inside.  Celia can make some interesting suits for people the size of ants to her. Since their too small to make by hand, I can assume she has a machine like a 3D printer that makes them for her.

The name of the A.I. Shannon, that's a reference to your MAJOR/Minor New Lives story isn't it. I do like Celia's playful exhibitionism streak, with her admiting that as a Gigantic she has little use for clothes and playfully flashing Erwan her butt in chapter 4. Celia isn't shy and has no problem being intimate with Erwan. One thing I would like Erwan to witness and describe is Celia peeing in front of him due to the sheer scale and spectacle of all that liquid coming out of her huge pussy. In chapter 2 she did afterall drink enough to cause the water level of a lake to drop and the lake to very visibly retract so the spectacle of her passing all that water and then some out of her pussy would be quite something for Erwan to witness and describe. If it replenishes the ground as she says, it's no wonder her territory is so green.

I do like the time and attention to detail put in the story and like how the chapters are long and richly detailed. Seeing this story being updated is one of the highlights of this site.

Author's Response:

I may have made a mistake around the Gigantic kids and meant six feet (three pairs of feet, in fact) :p. I'll re ad chapter 4 again just to be sure of it, at a later date XD !

I assure you that vaginal exploration (hell, body exploration) will be a theme, but we'll be taking things relatively slow. he can't go and get lost in her pussy on their very first date after all! 

I'm glad that you like the intro of each chapter. Ideally, it should be basically its own little story in the future, but used to delve into some more introspective elements, i guess. 

We may or may not see her urinate sooner or later, but I'm not yet set about it. And Shannon's name is indeed a nod to M/m ^^ !

As always, thanks for the kidn review, I'll try to keep up the good work for you to enjoy the future of this series :) !