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Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter. I liked the foreshadowing at the beginning of Celia swallowing Erwan, and Erwan realising he's about to go where few others have gone. At about 1700 feet tall the sense of scale will be amazing, a stomach the size of an arena, and over a mile of intestines. He'll be spending quite a long time on his fantastic voyage through the digestive tract of a gigantic. There's a lot of suspense and questions with that foreshadowing opener. Does she swallow him intentionally or unknowingly, is he in danger or not, does she provide him with a device like the necklace to help and/or protect him on his journey through her, and of course the sense of wonder of passing through a female gigantic. I will have to wait and see and I look forward to the updates.

There seems to be a lot of greenery in and around Celia's house. Is this because of her ability to eat and drink garbage and polluted water and expell nutrient rich waste. Like Celia drinking from polluted lakes and peeing out clean nutrient rich urine to replenish the ground. She's too big to have her own sewer line, and she can replenish the environment just by peeing. This is one of the interesting abilities mentioned in the last chapter, and one worth exploring and Erwan witnessing. So I was wondering if all the greenspace is a hobby of hers because of her ability, like planting baby trees, except with small parks in pots.


Having Erwan play with her nipple is an interesting and creative way for them to have foreplay considering the size difference. When they get to the pussy and she spreads it, I can see Erwan trying not to faint from all that pink. Considering that he's about the size of an ant to her, the easiest way for him to get a reaction from her is to get into her through her urethra/peehole since it's the smallest hole there, but big enough for him to get into and still be kind of tight enough for her to feel and get a reaction from a man the size of an ant. Her vagina is probably too big. Like the nipple sex it's a creative way to get a feeling despite the size difference and she's so huge no orifice is off limits. He could also get on her clit too, which would be bigger than him, but the pubic hair would get in the way. I don't see how she sees it as a safety net since at his size it would be like obstructive tree branches, and in the last chapter she was careful about loose hairs potentially hurting someone.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. You're the one who gave me the idea of Erwan exploring the inside of Celia. There will be at elast one chapter dedicated to it, the incipit of each chapter is really just a tease to that moment :) ! I therefore can't answer any of the questions you're asking here, it'd be far too much of a spoiler! 

Considering the greenery around Celia's house, it'll be explained and her natural calls will be explored a little. After all, even if they don't eat and drink as much as Normals, proportionally speaking, they do need a lot of water and food. Their kind of food, mostly. But her truly enormous trees (really, they are not baby trees XD) are indeed a hobby of hers, when they are in the pots she had crafted for those. Think of all the ones she has outside her house as a vast interconnected park, while the ones inside are more jardins and even tropical greenhouses. 

I haven't yet thought about how Erwan will interact with her pussy, but I can definitively say that she didn't thought about the problems with her hair down there, because I hadn't! Somehow, I felt that they "acted" differently than her hair elsewhere ^^ ! But you'll notice that her hair does fall near Erwan at some point in this chapter, and it's because when she's aroused, and she can be easily, she tend to be a little less careful. But I'll definitively try to think about all of this.

Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2019 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter, really love the relationship of the main characters growing and being more intimate. 

Really interested in seeing what the 'building' is like for Erwan. 



Author's Response:

We'll see more of the cabinet building in the next chapter and the kids also ! 

Expect a lot of crazy tech in there, courtesy of Celia ;)

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