Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2024 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Giantess Milfs are so hot , I like to see a world where all mature moms and milfs had become hot mini giantesses!!

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this idea of an extreme size disparity in a relationship with a gentle giantess. It allows for nearly unlimited body exploration, and it's original to see a gentle giantess that's the size of the tallest buildings from our perspective not on a rampage, and instead trying to form a caring relationship with someone the size of an ant from her perspective even when it's not very practical. It goes to show how committed she is to acknowledging regular sized people as individuals. Or maybe she has a fetish for them or both. The future setting and very advanced technology and engineering allows more storyline scenarios, and it helps to explain how the very large have managed to have their basic needs met and maintain comforts too.

Just to nitpick a few things. The main character mentions that the largest gigantics are 10000 times smarter than a normal high genius. This doesn't seem plausible since they would be in an entirely different state of consciousness altogether. Although the character admits that this is a saying and that he's not a science guy.

The restaurant has a terrace at 300m 1000 feet, yet he mentions that gigantics, which is what Celia turns out to be, are about 282.5 times his normal height of about 6 feet, so about 1700 feet. About the height of New York's tallest building. Meaning that Celia is far taller than the restaurant building. Unless she's sitting outside the building, sorry I just had to reread that and it seems to be the case, it just wasn't very clear in the description. The sense of scale of gigantics architecture and facilities must be mind boggling from a normals point of view.

Considering the extreme size difference, Celia and the main character will probably need to communicate with some sort of device. Like a very advanced smartphone that almost never runs out of energy.

And lastly, technically speaking the main character is wrong. None of the scientists in the Jurassic Park movie who created the dinosaurs are killed by dinosaurs. They all leave the island before the tropical storm hits, leaving only a skeleton crew of engineers and the game warden to oversee things. Sorry, but I just can't help but correct the main character there as I've literally seen the movie over a 100 times. Although, in the book, the lead geneticist is killed by a raptor.

I love the premise, and look forward to more. One scenario suggestion that I would love to see is Celia swallowing the main character either unintenionally or intentionally and the advanced technology keeps him from coming to harm while inside her. Heck, deep inside her guts might be the safest possible place for him to be, since at the size of an ant to her, he has a very good chance of falling to his death,getting squished, or getting lost if she tries to move him otherwise. And since it's mentioned that gigantics consume relatively little her insides would be mostly clean but still have more than enough food and water to sustain him. He would still be able to communicate with her, and it would be like being in a very large warm skyscraper if the skyscraper was a beautiful woman who cared about her guest. Maybe, that's why she invited him to a restaurant with a terrace at face level when she's sitting. A gentle giantess saying "Do you trust me?" "Please get in my mouth." There really isn't much endo content in this site, so I'm really hoping for some in this story since it's got a very good setup for it.

Author's Response:

Well, I wanted to get out of my comfort zone, which is basically mini-gts, just to see how I could make a gentle story with a giga-giantess working. Without spoiling, I can actually tell you that the doesn't have a fetish when it comes to Normals.

Concerning the intelligence, it'll be adressed and be a (small) plot point, because it won't be a too plot heavy story (I've done this with New Lives, far too much ;p).

As for the restaurant, yeah, Celia is outside, and towering over it. We'll see her eat next chapter and how she is different from Normals in ways far more deep than just her size, and yet remains extremely human. As for the device, it's also a major part of the second chapter, I've been thinking about it since even before writing the first word of this one !

And yep, he is indeed wrong about Jurassic Park. It's a shame, because it's the best film ever (fight me!), but it's really old to him, so I'll give him a pass. 

I'll admit I hadn't thought about the endo element. I won't make promises but it could appears, indeed. Perhaps not in the second chapter however, but I'll keep it in mind. 

Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2019 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd say the biggest issue is the multiple times of describing the size differences when it should've been all contained in one place to explain the size mechanics of this world. 

I'm still a bit confused on the size classifications for this world because that context is mentioned in and out of the story. There's nothing wrong with exposition, it's the execution of it. 

Maybe the best example of this is the Titan man when Erwin is on the train (the silent S business is also very strange since it's a strong consonant, not a vowel). You describe his size in the distance and his classification only just recently describing the 'smalls' size class. The purpose of that segment was Erwin to describe his first time seeing a gigantic being but is bogged down in details. 

Author's Response:

Oh, here are the classifications :

Normals (they are, well, normal peoples!); Smalls (around 20 meters, give or take a few; the tallest would be around 28 max, however) ; Giants (around 50 meters, max 55); Titans (around 200 meters, the smaller are 190, the taller 210); Gigantics (basically, they are all exactly 500 meters tall)

I'm glad you give me this info on the first Gigantic, because I actually believed it was clever, so it's good to know it isn't XD ! Concerning Erwan's name, its from Brittany in France with a very peculiar pronunciation, and I don't know the universal pronunciation sings (or whatever they are called). Perhaps a better description would have been to say that his name is pronounced like the "wan" in swan, without the s, basically. I tried to be clever again, and it was too clever by half, serves me right ! 

Reviewer: Carweirdo3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2019 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Moor.

Author's Response:

It's planned, but it may take some time. But don't worry, I do plan to continue this story :)