[Report This]Date: February 16 2023 8:39 AM Title: I Shrunk Myself!
Sorry, I found the story annoyingly and torturously repetitive. The poor creature should have gone hoarse with all the yelling he tried. No buildup of suspense. Storytelling at it’s worst.
Date: September 13 2019 4:27 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!
Another awesome Chapter! Does Nick have to try and escape Natalie as she sweeps the floor at some point? Could she be sweeping the floor with her shoes on??
Author's Response:
You will see but something like that yeah. But sweeping the floor with her shoes? I don't get it. Thanks for your support anyway!
Date: September 13 2019 12:23 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!
Why is this marked as ff/f ?
Author's Response:
Because I got wrong but tell me, the FF is when there are several women?
Date: September 12 2019 2:18 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!
Very good so far! I like it! Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thnks to you! The sequel is coming but you can already find it on my deviantart, the link is in my bio ;)