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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2023 8:39 AM Title: I Shrunk Myself!

Sorry, I found the story annoyingly and torturously repetitive. The poor creature should have gone hoarse with all the yelling he tried. No buildup of suspense. Storytelling at it’s worst.

Reviewer: mj4987 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2020 12:25 AM Title: Don't Eat Me!

One of my favorite chapters in any story, ever. Unaware vore is my favorite!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much ;)

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2020 4:57 PM Title: Down In The Dumps

Yes hopefully it is about to be the vore scene. Which involves being swallowed, since otherwise it would be mouth play. Really hope he ends up getting the full tour, and coming out the back end.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2020 2:39 AM Title: At Ground Level

Nice. He got sucked up. I wonder if the vacuum will be emptied in the kitchen trash or outside trash, either one will decide the story direction. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2020 6:44 PM Title: At Ground Level

Story reminds me a bit of honey I shrunk the kids.  Always yelling to get the giants attention but to small to be heard or seen easily.  Wondering how it will play out.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The sequel is coming very soon but you can already find it on my deviantart, the link is in my bio ;)

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2019 6:59 AM Title: The Troubles Begin

Nice chapter. And since one of the tags is vore, there is a ery good chance Nick will be swallowed. YES! I love vore stories, especially if the one vored lives to come out the other end alive. Though I enjoy the stories either way. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks to you!

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 4:27 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!

Another awesome Chapter! Does Nick have to try and escape Natalie as she sweeps the floor at some point? Could she be sweeping the floor with her shoes on??

Author's Response:

You will see but something like that yeah. But sweeping the floor with her shoes? I don't get it. Thanks for your support anyway!

Reviewer: GreenSock19 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 12:23 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!

Why is this marked as ff/f ?



Author's Response:

Because I got wrong but tell me, the FF is when there are several women?

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2019 2:18 PM Title: I Shrunk Myself!

Very good so far!   I like it!   Cant wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Thnks to you! The sequel is coming but you can already find it on my deviantart, the link is in my bio ;)

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