[Report This]Date: August 30 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: "The Festival of New Day"
I thought it was a good first chapter. Having the world buildIng in play form was a clever way to keep it from being a straight info dump. I have followed your work here and on Ekas and have to say you’re a very talented writer regardless of original or fanfiction. I’m also eager to see what else is added given the description you wrote.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading, rating, and reviewing! Yea, I didn't want to just have an exposition dump via me, the writer. I felt that if I had to have one, it'd be better if it came from an in-world character. I'm glad that went over well. I have what I think should be roughly 10 chapters in the concept phase, with about half in the outline phase. Most of the monster girls that will show up will be ones everyone is familiar with. The most unique, though, are the Amazonian pirate wolf girls. They're fun.