Date: August 26 2019 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far ... epic. This has great potential. What I especially loved was confusion after being shrunken, the unknown surroundings, closing explosion of earthqukes, and voice so powerful that it was taken for some monster. This is the way how scale difference should be portraited, the simply action of walking toward shoes and speaking was an overhelming, catastrophic event for the tiny. Foot emerging inside shoes was also epic. What I would love to read would be description of earth quaking under just tapping the big toe, but that just my 5 cents. Keep up the great job! Out of curiosity: how small is she?