[Report This]Date: December 02 2019 4:01 PM Title: Jake and Janine
No problem, I had wanted to put a scene similar to this in my story but although I had constantly rewrote that scene multiple times it keeps being ‘not Good enough’ hopefully I can get an inspiration from what you wrote if you don’t mind.
In my story the mc was way smaller and the giantess was aware but I was stuck on having a good giantess ‘interaction’
Author's Response:
I know how it's to get stuck when writing a chapter. I don't mind at all if you use my story as inspiration. In fact, I will be very happy if it manages to help you writing your own story. Good luck with your story and thanks for reading and commenting on mine.
Date: December 01 2019 7:11 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Just a suggestion, since their Father is a researcher. Katie puts him in a Petri dish to look at him but leaves for some reason.Jake May or may not shrink further
Maggie or someone(IMO young or not so smart) comes along and finds the Petri dish and maybe has some fun experiments with it
Author's Response:
Your idea just gave me inspiration for a future scenario Thank you for the suggestion. I've wrote it down and it will come in hand in future chapters. Stay tuned!
Date: October 28 2019 3:22 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Can’t wait for some interaction with Kate, maybe some armpit/foot(and I hope he gets sat on).
Just wondering will their current size be fixed?Or will there be any changes to their height?(jake and Janine) and I am assuming their around 0.3 millimeters tall?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting. This kind of interaction is one of the reasons I decided to try writing something on the site.
About Kate, she is back into the scene and I need to develop her character more since I’ve been focusing a lot on Maggie and Janine. Therefore, you can be sure shenanigans are bound to happen around her.
As stated in ch. 11, right now they are the size of a sand grain. That is about 2 mm if I am not mistaken. As for the question if this size will remain or change… well… keep following the story to find out ;)
Date: August 26 2019 3:56 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Glad to see that you’re keeping up with the story. It seems to me like there was a significant improvement in the grammar and formatting in the last chapter (Ch5).
One suggestion I would make is to be consistent with the use of quotation marks. If a character is speaking always use quotes, and try to use a new line anytime that a new character is speaking. This makes it a lot easier for the reader to follow along.
Keep up the good work! Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
It's always good to learn from the master XDD Thanks for the tips, specially about dialogues (I struggle a lot with them).
About the quotes, I am gonna try this on my next story. On this one I am using quotes to indicate inner thoughts of the characters.
Thank you for all the support! It means a lot. Your work is gold! :)
Date: August 19 2019 7:41 AM Title: Jake and Janine
This will be a nice read, I´m sure! The character introduction of Janine is very powerful and I already love to hate her!
Also the protagonist Jake seems to be someone being used to harder conditions. Can´t wait to see the class difference between the two also reflected in their sizes.
You should do a proof-reading and check for spelling-mistakes, but other than that it is very well-written!
Author's Response:
You are right on the spot about Jake. I am trying to organize my thoughts, but I can asure you there is a very good reason for this early introduction of Janine. Many ideas for her and the other chracters. Please, stay tunned and many thaks for the support and tips! You are great!