Date: August 11 2020 9:37 AM Title: Everything back into place... almost
Nice to see an old story come back to life. And for english not being your primary language the story is very well written and easy to read. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
Thanks a lot! It's reassuring to hear my writing is not as bad as I thought it was. Don't worry, it might take a while but I am working with a lot of ideas for this story.
Date: December 18 2019 3:19 PM Title: Her first time with a flea
Glad to see that you're sticking with it! Excellent progress thus far!
Hey man!! So glad to see you too and to know you are still reading and liking my story :D
Just saw your reply on Titan's Reach. No rush. Just happy to know you haven't give up on the site.
If you ever need some help for inspiration, I am here. We could even work on a project together if you ever feel like it :)
Thanks for commenting. I will take this opportunity and wish you a merry Xmas and happy new year. That 2020 may bring you hapiness, inspiration and sucess!
Date: December 02 2019 4:01 PM Title: Jake and Janine
No problem, I had wanted to put a scene similar to this in my story but although I had constantly rewrote that scene multiple times it keeps being ‘not Good enough’ hopefully I can get an inspiration from what you wrote if you don’t mind.
In my story the mc was way smaller and the giantess was aware but I was stuck on having a good giantess ‘interaction’
I know how it's to get stuck when writing a chapter. I don't mind at all if you use my story as inspiration. In fact, I will be very happy if it manages to help you writing your own story. Good luck with your story and thanks for reading and commenting on mine.
Date: December 01 2019 7:11 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Just a suggestion, since their Father is a researcher. Katie puts him in a Petri dish to look at him but leaves for some reason.Jake May or may not shrink further
Maggie or someone(IMO young or not so smart) comes along and finds the Petri dish and maybe has some fun experiments with it
Your idea just gave me inspiration for a future scenario Thank you for the suggestion. I've wrote it down and it will come in hand in future chapters. Stay tuned!
Date: December 01 2019 8:59 AM Title: Her first time with a flea
This is a great chapter! The setup was good, the bathing part was well done. I'm looking forward to where you take this story next
I always strive to make everything connect, mixing the giantess parts with character and world building in a way that makes sense in the end. This is my first story, so its always good to know people are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and commenting. Feel free to make suggestions if you want. I will see you in the next chapter :)
Date: November 26 2019 7:59 PM Title: So near yet so far
HOLY SHIT! Great chapter! I wonder what Kate will do if she finds him like this... 👀lol
I think you will find out soon enough what she will do... if you have something you would like to see happening, you can tell me and I will do my best to include it in the story. Thak you for always commenting. You are great!
Date: October 30 2019 10:28 PM Title: Nate
Lmao I love Nate already XD
I also loved how this first introduction of Nate turned out. Do you believe I innitially imagined him as a villain? I was going to introduce him earlier on the story but gave up on the idea and reimagined his character kkkkkkkk. Now I am glad I did it.
Date: October 28 2019 3:22 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Can’t wait for some interaction with Kate, maybe some armpit/foot(and I hope he gets sat on).
Just wondering will their current size be fixed?Or will there be any changes to their height?(jake and Janine) and I am assuming their around 0.3 millimeters tall?
Thank you for reading and commenting. This kind of interaction is one of the reasons I decided to try writing something on the site.
About Kate, she is back into the scene and I need to develop her character more since I’ve been focusing a lot on Maggie and Janine. Therefore, you can be sure shenanigans are bound to happen around her.
As stated in ch. 11, right now they are the size of a sand grain. That is about 2 mm if I am not mistaken. As for the question if this size will remain or change… well… keep following the story to find out ;)
Date: October 13 2019 9:31 PM Title: Jake's world
"And so the plot thickens…" ;) lol Love where this story is going! And yet another fantastic chapter! Loved the shrunken Jake content, and I wonder what this Nate guy is like… Can’t wait to read more! Omg
Glad to know you liked the shrunk content. The only thing I can say for sure right now is that there is a lot in store for everyone, including Nate ;)
Date: October 01 2019 6:50 PM Title: Cold shoulder
Great chapter! And that's a tough question, but I think I’d definitely love to see Jake shrink tho ;)
Sorry for the delay but I think you will like this new chapter. There is a lot more to come so stay tuned. And thank you for your comments. It really helps to keep me motivated :)
Date: September 21 2019 2:08 AM Title: Incestuous desire - Part I
Holy shit! I think this is my new favorite chapter! I can't wait to see what happens to Jake! Great story!
Thank you for the support! Your comments really fueled my will to continue and I already started writing the next chapter (hopefully, I will be able to upload it on monday) Many things will start happening due to these last 3 chapters. Hope you like how things play out.
Date: September 21 2019 1:53 AM Title: The princess treatment
Omg!! Jake officially just earned the "Big Brother of the Year" award for this chapter! What a legend! lol
I agree kkkkkk. He really cares deeply for his younger sisters well being, but you know what they say: too much of anything can be dangerous kkkkkkkkk
Date: September 21 2019 1:11 AM Title: Golden sandals
Lol I'm loving these characters! So far, I think Maggie is my favorite ;)
I also like Maggie very much and she is very important in a lot of scenarios I thought for the future. If you have something you would like to see or happen to her, fell free to share. Suggestions are always welcome :D
Date: September 21 2019 12:54 AM Title: Maggie and Kate
Great story so far! Loving these characters
Thank you! I really try to focus on the characters and I am really glad to see people are liking them so far. Stay tuned! Lots of ideas for the future of Jake & cia. ;)
Date: August 26 2019 3:56 PM Title: Jake and Janine
Glad to see that you’re keeping up with the story. It seems to me like there was a significant improvement in the grammar and formatting in the last chapter (Ch5).
One suggestion I would make is to be consistent with the use of quotation marks. If a character is speaking always use quotes, and try to use a new line anytime that a new character is speaking. This makes it a lot easier for the reader to follow along.
Keep up the good work! Can’t wait to see what happens next.
It's always good to learn from the master XDD Thanks for the tips, specially about dialogues (I struggle a lot with them).
About the quotes, I am gonna try this on my next story. On this one I am using quotes to indicate inner thoughts of the characters.
Thank you for all the support! It means a lot. Your work is gold! :)
Date: August 26 2019 9:38 AM Title: Enters the good doctor
Outstanding, the premise of your story is so interesting and refreshing that
I would read it even if it werent a giantess story.
Waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
I try to input the size related parts in a way that it doesn't compromise the world building, but also contributes to character development. Really happy to know you are liking the story so far! Thanks for reading and don't worry. I will do my best to keep the updates frequent.