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Reviewer: Samuel Orona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 15 2019 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

If Alexa was 5’-2” she would stand 372 feet tall from the perspective of someone who stands one inch tall.

Any dialogue should go in quotation marks. This is a decent story, it’s off to a good start.

Author's Response: Aye thanks I’m going to add some more when I get off work today and I’ll be sure to fix that for continuity Reasons this response put a smile on my face :)

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