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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2021 8:57 AM Title: Part I

Will you be updating this story soon?



Author's Response:

It's unfortunately far down the line, behind a bunch of other projects I've taken on~ I think it's healthy for this story to take a little break anyway, gives me a chance to really piece together the next stretch of this saga! Thank you for reading and for your patience~

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2021 8:57 AM Title: Part I

Will you be updating this story soon?

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Date: July 16 2021 8:53 PM Title: Part XVIII

Such a wonderful, sexy, chapter! So glad Sierra & Ophelia got to have a night off love making together! I hope this isn't the last chapter? I'd love to see them become a proper couple, together!

I really want to know what else they got up to during their night of Love making. When you wrote: "I'm sure we can think of things to do.." I thought we were in for even more sexy fun! I would have loved to read Sierra exploring Orphelia's body further! I feel she would have wanted to go to Orphelia's giant feet, given her previous actions, and explored and climbed between her toes! Or maybe she would have wanted to explore items belonging to Orphelia, like her shoes, and seen how small she feels standing on the insole, inside, Orphelia's scent surrounding her!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2021 8:18 AM Title: Part XVII

I love this story! It's truly wonderful! This chapter was so sexy, and I love the foot fetish/ foot worship scene! I hope the next chapter continues to get hot & steamy, and Sierra gets to explore Duval's body as she's always wanted (including her feet!)

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2021 4:02 PM Title: Part XVII

I love this story.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 11:08 PM Title: Part XVI

This story is truly fantastic! I really enjoy the realism of these characters. The conflict between them feels so real that I can't stop reading. I just want these people to be happy damn it! Keep up the good work! Godspeed!

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2020 1:38 PM Title: Part XV

I just want to say I apperciate you continuing this story. This site doesn't get well written geentle stories very often. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2020 9:04 AM Title: Part XV

Drama and sadness galore in this chapter.

Well written though.

I want Duval and Sierra to have a happy ending (here's hoping they get one!) 

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2020 9:00 PM Title: Part XIII

Excellent chapters. Can't wait to see how supervisor Ericka handles this. I also can't wait to see Duval and Sierra's interactions at the terrarium.

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2020 10:43 PM Title: Part XIII

Chapter 13 was another masterpiece! Loved the erotic, sexual tension! The in panty scene was delicious! Please continue in the same manner!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2020 10:41 PM Title: Part XII

Amazing chapter! One of the best I've ever read! The toe-gasm scene was perfect! I hope to see some more foot worship and desire to be humiliated under them in future chapters!

Reviewer: Saf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2020 4:51 PM Title: Part XII

This is my favorite story of all time. So sweet and gentle! Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Quince_Denver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2020 4:29 AM Title: Part I

Amazing. Pacing is perfect - not too fast, not too slow. The characters' interactions and thoughts feel very natural and not just forced for the plot. 

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2020 9:30 PM Title: Part X

Ericka's got to be fucking with Duval. She totally knew Duval took Sierra in there, and if she didn't, Duval's and repeated 'get to the bottom of it' *tap tap would have tipped her off. She probably moved the Rook to give Duval a way to retreive Sierra without being obvious. I bet she got a thrill watching her steps as she passed over Sierra's tiny body.

And Sierra struggling against Duval's nipple. Mercy! And Duval almost pleasing herself with Sierra still in her pocket. Just too good.

Look forward to more escalation.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2020 2:10 PM Title: Part X

First of all great end to part three. Duval seems to have some kind of feelings for Sierra but neither has acknowledged these feelings to each other. I'm more interested in seeing how that comes about.
What I'm concerned about is that Duval was acting very suspiciously while speaking with Ericka and she suspects something is amiss and that this 'lab' (only say that because I can't remember what the area was called) where the Rook was located is bound to have some kind of security system. Maybe no audio but I'd be shocked if there wasn't a camera or two. However, there is a chance Duval and likewise the other higher ups offices won't be monitored but the tiny subjects definitely would be. Now I'm just thinking out loud here, but what if Ericka uses power to check up on Duval's subjects throughout that day and would see something unusual. Maybe just maybe she sees Duval take out a subject and not return the individual until after she personally walked her back to her office some odd number of hours later. So maybe she wants to confront Duval or possibly she wants to do a bit more research and find out exactly who it was. Once she figures out basically what we know, she may choose to interrogate Sierra in her office by threatening her that she'd be out of the program and sent home if she didn't comply or she'd question Duval or she questions them both at the same time. Or she could just sit on this information and see what happens, but either way she would most definitely like to tease Duval with subtle hints about the situation. Remarking how funny it would be to have a pedicure by a few subjects or that she wonders if Duval has had any proclivities or eccentricities toward tiny subjects she's too scared to mention. While just using this as an exercise to gauge Duval's reaction.

Like I said just thinking out loud. And I can't wait for part four.

aaron

PS. I gonna be honest, I only started reading this because 'feet' was in the category but that's not why I stayed. I have been pleasantly surprised from the beginning. And I'm so glad your girlfriend requested it. Thank you.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 8:17 PM Title: Part X

What a great story so far. I wonder what Sierra was doing in that pocket while Duval was groping herself... she could definitely use the heat as an excuse for some naughty behavior as to why she's flushed and sweaty.

Also, with how much humiliation or violence is in many of the other stories that get posted here, a slow build gentle romance is definitely a breath of fresh air.

Reviewer: Saf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 6:22 PM Title: Part X

This is so cute. I love their interactions so much. You are great.

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 4:38 PM Title: Part III

Great story. I think this is my favourite chapter so far. I love how Sierra fantasies. Her fantasy about being punished and forced for clean Duval's high heels or  massage her feet was incredibly erotic! Can't wait for more scenes like this!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 4:35 PM Title: Part X

Really enjoying this story. I hope Duval & Sierra succumb to their shared desires soon! I'm hoping to see some really intimate, shared fun together!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2020 10:23 AM Title: Part IX

A cliffhanger.
I wonder if Ericka tries to blackmail Duval about Sierra being here or if she may just kick her off the project(granted that's seems extreme but I wouldn't be surprised especially since she's the number two or three of the entire project).
I think it's cute that Ophelia was so excited to show Sierra this city and mainly 'the Rook' while Sierra would be excited anywhere with Ophelia.

aaron

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