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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2023 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loving the update, but at the same time it still hurts reading Audrey like this, unaware of what Desmond is going through :(

This was a great lengthy chapter, and again you write great interaction and scenes with these characters. 

But I'm still hoping for Desmond and Audrey to reunite and for Jackie to get what's coming to her. 

It's a strange dichotomy these chapters have, well written scenes and moments, but at the same time sitting here wishing they were different (with Desmond and Audrey XD)

As the more time Audrey spends with Dilly and the more fun they have, I just see it being a harder reunion between her and Desmond. 

Anyway, as I said you crafted another really well written chapter here and thank you for updating. 

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