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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2022 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh, how I hope that female Goliath meets her David.  Crashing and burning, real bad, as a result!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 10 2022 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 41

Things are turbulent for Desmond right now....wow...

I mean part of me still is hoping for him and Jackie to get back together.

But things seem bleaker with each chapter. (I mean if she could see sense and listen to Desmond about what happened...)

10 foot 4!! Oh wow....

Another great chapter, you're going great work on this story. 

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