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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 39

Ouch.....like ouch!

I was actually rooting for Jackie and Desmond. (any chance of them getting back together in the long run?)

The ending of this chapter is such a cliff-hanger. 

Well written, and a real rollercoaster of emotion and content. 

Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Hey, there's always a chance.

And don't worry the next two chapters are already written, I plan to release them soon. Really glad you liked this chapter. It's a pretty pivotal plot point so I'm glad it's been received well. 

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