Date: October 24 2019 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just when I think Jackie couldn’t be any MORE suspicious, she proves me wrong yet again… lol I wonder what the conversation between her and Des’ mom was REALLY like… Anyways, I’ve still gotta admit, “Goddess Jackie” sure does have a nice ring to it… 😅 haha
Date: September 27 2019 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Foot boy? If this goes anywhere near where I want it to, you have my appreciation... ;)
Also, that exchange with Faith was really hot, she was my favorite from the time in Chapter 3 when we last met Jackie’s friends.
Keep up the good work!
Date: September 26 2019 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hey,
Like your other reviewers, I'm really enjoying the story and psyched to learn where it will go. While I liked Audrey, I'm rooting for Jackie at this point, especially as she complementary fetish angle develops.
The sister feels a bit over the top however, and the mother is inconsistent. I'm sure we haven't seen the last of them, but I'm not eager for them to return.
Anyhow, you do have me hooked, and I'm really looking forward to the next exciting episode.