[Report This]Date: October 21 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Omg I freakin love Audrey! And I’m glad that Des is finally realizing that there’s something very fishy about Jackie… 👀 (Ugh, this is such a great story!)
Date: September 19 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just have to ask - did anyone inspire Audrey's phisique? Whenever I try to picture her I never know if she should have almost ridiculous proportions or she's just very well endowed in 50% of her body.
I have a soft spot for stories where the protagonist loses his mind over a woman (nvm two!),
so I'm not exactly objective, but this story is coming along really nicely.
Author's Response:
No one in particular inspired Audrey's physique. When I was writing the first chapter she was featured in, she wasn't really supposed to have a long term role. I just wanted to make Desmond's bus ride home a little claustrophobic (and sexy). Audrey blossomed into so much more than that, and I'm so glad that she did because she is one of my favorite characters to write now. I love writing Jackie too though, so I'm trying to find a good balance.
And you're right! Desmond is losing his mind over two women!
Really glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: September 19 2019 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
So I’ve changed who my favorite love interest is, but I think that was the point. ;)
I love Audrey’s character description. A big tall girl who’s thick without being fat. She’s also so playful and sexy. My favorite thing about her would have to be the fact that she is able to be so loving and genuinely caring while still totally teasing and even poking fun at his size. I love the idea of being a smaller guy with a bigger girl.
Part of me wants to see Desmond get smaller while in Audrey’s possession(like maybe even Minikin). I don’t know how you’re gonna resolve the shrinking in terms of Jackie’s role, but I’m excited to see it!
Keep it up! (And btw, if you did do some footplay, like I mentioned before, I’d love to see it with Audrey ;), as I’d love her to be the true love interest!)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like Audrey, and it's easy to see why. I wrote her to be super likable. As for Jackie, she still has a big role to play in this story (she is the title character after all). But of course, both women will have a role to play.