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Reviewer: Juliodragon69 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2021 7:13 AM Title: Just Desserts

what will happen to Cameron ?? The story ended and has not yet been revealed







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Author's Response:

Check out the new chapters!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 1:53 PM Title: Just Desserts

I thought there would be another shrinking dynamic in the story after Liz's sudden shrinking incident. Pleasantly surprised it was Alexis and not Ashley that ended up shrinking. If any of Alexis' victims other then her father are still around, here's hoping Ashley will drop them off to the authorities/shelters so they can go home/get help. The eventual sibling reunion chapter will be an interesting one to see.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think the majority of people felt that Alexis deserved a bit of karmic justice lol. The only other tiny in the Tailford house was Dr. Tailford, her father. I purposely left his story vague becuase I'm thinking about how he might come into play in one of the side stories for this "universe." 

 

I hope you enjoy the finale, and thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Uroborus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 12:26 AM Title: Just Desserts

It would be great if Alexis started living by the rules that Max was supposed to follow(chapter 31-32)
I have a question. Why didn't Liz and Ivan go to the police?



Author's Response:

At the moment I am planning a side story that will detail Alexis' time served under Missy/Liz. Keep an eye on my profile to see what happens when that story eventually comes out. (It'll be a little while though) 

 

And as for the police, this is actually addressed in the side story "Losing Control: Escape from Tailford Manor." Essentially society has not adapted quickly enough for RP's to be classified the same as regular humans with rights. So while Liz's family has gone to the police about Alexis before, they can't actually arrest her for anything becuase it isnt technically illegal. (Honestly this is just because I didnt want to have to turn Alexis or any of the cast into fugitives)

 

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 10:04 PM Title: Just Desserts

Yes.....yes....YESSSS!!!


Oh yes, Alexis shrinking, ohh hell yes! I am so freaking elated right now. 


Please let their be a several chapter payback on her, she more than deserves some punishment. 

Also how delusional is she, saying about tinies not being people, but when she shinks she just seemingly forgets her words (I know given the situation she is freaking out and wanting help) But still, phew this is going to be fun. I am going to enjoy her getting karmic payback.

She deserves to suffer. 



Author's Response:

Revenge is a dish best served sweaty haha. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading about her downfall as much as I enjoyed writing it. And the good news is that there WILL be some content involving Alexis' torment, but the bad news is that it won't be a part of this story. I am likely going to add a side story of just a couple chapters. 

 

I hope you enjoy the ending. Thanks for reading!

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