Giantess World
Reviews For Losing Control
Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 8:35 PM Title: Expulsion
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much. Ass and farts are definitely my primary kink so it will likely come up a lot in all of my writing. Still I appreciate that people can enjoy my writing even if it features content that they aren’t particularly interested in. I hope you stay tuned through the finale! (Be aware that there will be more farting though haha) Thanks for reading!
Date: August 29 2019 8:35 PM Title: Expulsion
Have loved this story, very well written, a little too much fart stuff for me but did not get in the way of enjoying it. Would like to see Megan join him in the shower and see where that goes. Maybe he will reluctantly let her have her way after saving his life and all.
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much. Ass and farts are definitely my primary kink so it will likely come up a lot in all of my writing. Still I appreciate that people can enjoy my writing even if it features content that they aren’t particularly interested in. I hope you stay tuned through the finale! (Be aware that there will be more farting though haha) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Uroborus Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 2:33 AM Title: Expulsion
Author's Response: Don’t worry, I welcome any and all criticism. Ashley doesn’t actually approve of her brother being voted. She was under the impression that Alexis was going to kidnap him, not eat him. This will be made much more clear in a future chapter. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: August 29 2019 2:33 AM Title: Expulsion
What happened to Ashley? In chapter 27, she was furious that she could swallow her brother. And after 2 days, Ashley agrees that Alexis swallows Max. Ashley WTF?!
And why did not Megan tell the story of Ivan?
P.S. I'm not criticizing the story as a whole, only how the character changed to the worse
Author's Response: Don’t worry, I welcome any and all criticism. Ashley doesn’t actually approve of her brother being voted. She was under the impression that Alexis was going to kidnap him, not eat him. This will be made much more clear in a future chapter. Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: StoryArt1715 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2019 7:43 PM Title: Expulsion
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: August 28 2019 7:43 PM Title: Expulsion
Great story. I love the character development.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!