Date: August 02 2019 1:04 PM Title: The beginning
Great seeing stuff from you again! The themes are familiar, but the new format puts a pretty sweet twist on it. I definitely second ChompChomp's question - in chapter 2, who is our motherly giantess speaking with? Someone in her pocketed planet, or someone off it?
And if she didn't want people in her smartphone spying on her in the night, she shoulda bought a VPN.
I'm curious about her reaction to everyone seeing her; and also, excited to see if the app has any extra functionality. Rewind/fast-forward buttons? A pedometer to keep her moving? Globe-wide filters? That's not even getting into how her other apps for browsing, chatting, or gaming might affect her~
Author's Response:
This story is pretty similar to my other ones! But I think this setting is my favorite. I absolutely adore the idea of a normal woman with all her flaws and personality, being an all powerful deity to millions in the palm of her hand
Glad you enjoy it! I'll definitely be putting out another chapter soon c:
Date: July 14 2019 6:28 PM Title: The beginning
So if the world is in her phone? Where is she? This is all confusing without any backstory.....
Date: July 14 2019 5:01 PM Title: The beginning
Hey great start!
I am glad that one of my favorite authors is back! I hope you write more in the future I love every single one pf your stories.
Thank you for the great work
[Report This]Date: July 12 2019 1:57 PM Title: The trip home
Definitely an interesting story. Curious to know what she will do with the planet, maybe she will tease her son ans the world by showing off those new thongs she just bought from Victoria’s Secret.
Date: July 12 2019 1:43 AM Title: The beginning
Definitely a good start. I like how the story didn't waste time building up and simply got straight into the fun action. Honestly, there are so many great routes you could go down with this type of story, even if they are simple gentle/ maternal domination type tales.
What I wouldn't mind seeing is each chapter (like this one) not have any build up and just involves the mother playing with the planet in different ways. You don't need an in-depth story every time. Sometimes some quick one offs are better than a long winded story.
Whatever you choose I think I'm going to like it so I'm looking forward to what else you will do.
Author's Response:
Especially for a complex setting like this, I feel like it's better to just start in the action, and explain the world gradually through stuff that happens; rather than dumping all the exposition at once
Glad you like it! I'm a fan of your stories c:
[Report This]Date: July 11 2019 10:52 PM Title: The beginning
This is great, I'm interested in seeing some incest, or what she does with the planet such as power plays. I think it'd be swell if she was super infatuated with her son, like she's shown so far.