Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2019 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Aspect

Just read all 3 chapters. My favorite was the 1st one so far. There is something eerie about displaying tinies to the world and the audience seems to accept their fate when that woman (I forgot her name) was wearing them as jewelry.

All 3 chapters took place in different areas. First was that theater. Then the hospital, and then a bar? (I think). It’s great to see the different perspectives of how society treats these “mins” and implements that into everyday life.

This story is very plot driven so far which is great for setting the scene. As other reviewers mentioned, your ability to storytell is amazing and I could only wonder when you add the sexual element to this story, how it would turn out.

I’m not sure where this story is going, but it’s only the beginning. I’m just along for the ride and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think I gave myself a lot more time to really smooth out all the edges of the first chapter, where the rest are slightly rougher around the edges, but I'm hoping each has its own personality.

Thank you for the great review!