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Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2020 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

Were you planning on continuing this? I loved the story, I hope it didn't end. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2019 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Aspect

Just read all 3 chapters. My favorite was the 1st one so far. There is something eerie about displaying tinies to the world and the audience seems to accept their fate when that woman (I forgot her name) was wearing them as jewelry.

All 3 chapters took place in different areas. First was that theater. Then the hospital, and then a bar? (I think). It’s great to see the different perspectives of how society treats these “mins” and implements that into everyday life.

This story is very plot driven so far which is great for setting the scene. As other reviewers mentioned, your ability to storytell is amazing and I could only wonder when you add the sexual element to this story, how it would turn out.

I’m not sure where this story is going, but it’s only the beginning. I’m just along for the ride and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think I gave myself a lot more time to really smooth out all the edges of the first chapter, where the rest are slightly rougher around the edges, but I'm hoping each has its own personality.

Thank you for the great review!

Reviewer: tinygirlvoyeur Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Aspect

Well the last line sent chills down my spine. I like stories that, yknow, have a plot. Keep going.



Author's Response:

Roger that. :)

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2019 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

Just realized I didn't leave a rating last time, and hell, this is a great excuse to go into greater detail in light of the new chapters, so why not? 

I wanted to start off by saying that your writing is genuinely good. It's not just that the scenarios are sexy or your appealing to my kinks, you do a great job making the reading itself fun. The way the characters talk and act, the way you chose to say "the Good Aspect woke up" in that clever way, it's all so much fun to go through and I love seeing new chapters posted.

That being said, I'd be remiss if I didn't say I loved seeing that M/f tag seeing some use (and hopefully a FM/m tag in the future but I'm not pushing for anything, you do whatever you want to do). The chapters really make you feel the horror of the minpeople, especially that second chapter, and even in situations where my monkey brain would normally kick in and I'd think of nothing but the lewdness you keep the terror and fear everpresent and I love that.

Great job all around, I'm looking forward to what comes next, your chapters are always a pleasant surprise.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :')

Before this story is over, I intend to have more drawn out/described X-rated scenarios as well as scenarios in all iterations of gendered giant(ess) and mini interaction. I won't tell you when though, so you'll just have to wait to be pleasantly surprised again.

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2019 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

This story has a lot of potential, would love to see you stick with it for a long time!

Author's Response:

Thank you! As of now, I intend to.

Reviewer: stopmakingmereregister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2019 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

Thank you so much for reposting this! I've been looking for this story for years. Never understood why it was taken down in the first place. Do you plan to add more chapters?



Author's Response:

I was considering trying to turn it into an actual book, but I've decided I like it more here where I can have some fun with it ;)

More chapters are most definitely on the way! Got the next one all ready for a last minute look over.

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

Let me start off by saying that I'm really glad to see a new writer around, always good to see a fresh face making new stories. And, if what you've written so far is any indication, your stories are gonna be fantastic. I love the set up, I love the way you write, and I love your tastes. Looking forward to seeing how this story develops, great job so far. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: closetslave1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

What a great start. Will you be continuing this one?



Author's Response:

Sure will!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2019 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Silver Linings

Loved Mrs. Strickland and Layla. They both know how to treat little people. I can hardly wait until Mrs. Strickland walks into the shelter to examine all the little people. I'd enjoy seeing Layla degrade more little ones. It also would be nice to see Mrs. Strickland talking down or being cruel to some tiny ones. I'm greatly enjoying your story.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I'm also quite a fan of Mrs. Strickland's. Each chapter of this story is going to follow different characters/scenarios, but I won't say that characters that were focused on in one chapter won't show up at all as side characters in future entries.

Thank you for the review!

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