Date: February 26 2021 12:08 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Quando tivermos mais ???
Date: August 17 2020 1:49 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Whew! This was a great story. The worldbuilding, the characters, the fetish fuel. The ending did seem a bit abrupt but it works. There are stories I read that I come to like for the worldbuilding more than the fetish fuel and this is certainly one of them. I feel like an eqiplogue would be good though, just to see how things turned out. I bet the tiny government and citizens are less than pleased about all the destruction and death and there is the matter of the other giants too.
The size changing technology has a lot of potential, especially now that Mary is in charge of the company and wants to help people. That in itself seems like quite the uphill battle and could be a story in and of itself. Nontheless, this was a great story and had me excited start to finish. Good job!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2020 1:38 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Wasn't expecting that...
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 8:09 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
I didn't see that ending coming. It seems like Naomi was getting really whiney in this one. She has so much self pity and yet absolutely no feelings for her victims. Thank God someone took her down a notch. But I will also say that I will miss Naomi and this story. It was so well written and one of the few giantess stories on this site.
It was a hell of a ride, thank you for writing. And hopefully maybe until next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the stars! I had a couple ideas for the ending I wrestled with, and this was the one that I went with. I was hoping people wouldn't expect it, I didn't want a typical ending... thanks for all your comments along the way too!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 3:30 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Though I have not left any review of your story until today, I have followed it since the beginning. Seeing it coming to an end actually makes me miss it already, it is among the best ones in recent times... One definitely should not take good stories for granted...
The lack of an extended epilogue is, however, a detrimental factor. The plot is cut short abruptly, leaving many questions unanswered (for example: how Mary's and Naomi's aging process is affected by changes that affected them? Are there any further implications?).
Perhaps, having already created an interesting setting, you could consider another story in the same universe? There seems to be lots of things to explore and obviously an epilogue will not suffice to do so.
Personally, I care more about the story than 'true' fetish content, so you have at least one reader who is actually interested characters' future devlopments; do not make hasty assumptions!
Best Regards,
C
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading man! I agree that the ending is abrupt, I'm sorry about that! I had some things planned for the characters... but I thought I'd leave it up to the reader's imagination. I wrote a bunch of stuff, but I really prefer the swift ending it currently has. I do like the thought of returning to this world... same characters or different... like you said, there's a lot to explore. Maybe these characters will springboard to some new characters to move the story forward.
Thanks for leaving a review and leaving the stars, I appreciate it. Hearing that you enjoyed it and miss it already makes me feel like I accomplished something (even if it's just a size story on the internet).