Date: July 19 2020 11:56 PM Title: Lessons Learned
It looks like turning into a giant and the power it affords over the tiny world is just too arousing. I can't tell if Naomi genuinely wants a friend or if she's just manipulating everyone for fun. Mary is pretending to be allies with both sides and is clearly enjoying herself despite her second thoughts, and poor William just can't catch a break. Keep it up! This story is fun :)
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I think Naomi really wants a freind but she just doesn't know how to be one. She hasn't had one since growing. And she's only let her hatred of the tinies fester and grow. I'm glad the story is fun! I'm definitely not trying to win any writing awards, for sure! But if someone enjoys what I write, then that makes me happy!
Date: July 15 2020 1:56 AM Title: Lessons Learned
It's kind of weird how many bizzarre pieces of tech Naomi has. Like this chapter she has a portal that makes someone massive, but only for a period of time. That's a super specific piece of tech.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's the portal that was used for Mary's job in chapter 4, which was posted almost a year ago... so it's been a while since it was mentioned. That's a writing mistake on my part for not making that clear. And, in the next chapter, you will see why Sasha began shrinking.
And thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:49 PM Title: Lessons Learned
Unintentional destruction is my fave. Nice work.
Author's Response:
One of mine too, haha. Thanks!