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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2020 5:38 AM Title: Fresh Start

The plot thickens



Author's Response:

Yes it does! Hope you like it!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2020 2:20 AM Title: Fresh Start

Urgghh, William is honestly my least favorite character XD

Just have Mary and Naomi subjugate him under their feet, or just eat him already. 



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah mine too. I never designed him to be like-able... so I guess I've succeeded? And as much as I'd like to write him out like you mentioned, I'm going to give the story a proper ending and wrap things up in the next 2 or 3 chapters.

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2020 9:04 PM Title: Fresh Start

Looks like things are about to get real. I’m still a big Naomi fan, but Mary...not so much. Tbh I think William would be better off with Naomi. At least Naomi knows how she is and can be reasoned with to an extent. Mary is just arrogant at this point.

Author's Response:

I considered that idea, but I feel sorry for Mary... 

 

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