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Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2020 6:29 AM Title: Mary’s Fun

Kind of hard to hate on Naomi when someone else is made big and very shortly after they turn into a killer for fun. Like is Naomi trying to prove a point here by making Mary big? Well, I don't think she's that clever. But yeah, wtf, it really didn't take long for Mary to get corrupted by her power.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's one of the things I've always liked about Mary's character is that she always goes off the deep end... and it never takes much either. But she almost always feels guilty for it later in some way. I intend to explore her internal struggle a little more. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2020 2:36 PM Title: Mary’s Fun

Thank you for writing an actual giantess story on this site. The small details of Mary being a giantess like the cleaning squad and the  earthquakes make the story so unique and a stand out compared to the bulk of just shrinking stories out here on this site!

Seems like Mary is turning out to be quite the cruel giantess. Maybe if William was a bit more excited for his wife and embraced the idea a bit more, stuff would be better. I would be thrilled if my wife became a giantess I think.

It's also nice that Naomi has a friend finally. Maybe this will dampen her cruel tendencies a bit and make her remember her humanity.

Thanks for writing and until next time!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for liking it! Yeah, William should have definately handled it better. But I think they're on good terms now, so things should be alot better for him.

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