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Reviewer: titantonic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 11:44 AM Title: Naomi's Massacre

Nice chapter. A return to form for Naomi. Reminds me of an earlier chapter when she squished the widow lol



Author's Response:

Yes it was, thank you!

Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2020 9:15 PM Title: Naomi's Massacre

Liked getting anoter dose of spicy action from full mean Naomi. A bit of interesting character development in this one as well. I think William is developing a bit of rapport and subtle attraction towards Naomi. You did a great job earlier setting up the emotions of him to feel guilty for betraying her and accept his punishment. Now he seems to be judging others for tryign to betray her. This triangle is a very tense situation for all 3 of them. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, man. I want Will to feel very confilicted between hating her and feeling sorry for her. And in the midst of all that, like you said, some attraction maybe? It will be interesting to see him deal with his feelings toward Naomi and how that affects his relationship with Mary. So we'll see what developes. Hope you continue to enjoy.

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