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Reviewer: Maned74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2020 8:06 PM Title: Mary's Loyalty

So far Naomi just insert herself into William's family. She simple desire to be part of a family and being love back and with her background reveal makes much sense, but maybe that is just me.

Keep going. Like it by this point. 



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Thanks for liking it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2020 10:49 PM Title: Mary's Loyalty

What are you people doing to sweet Naomi?



Author's Response:

Haha! It's not going to end well for them I don't think.

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