[Report This]Date: December 20 2019 11:19 AM Title: High-Heel Workday
Wow, I loved this chapter, it was written extremely well! Definitely your best one yet. Can't wait to read more.
And yeah, I don't know what that guys problem is. He's just a troll.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: December 18 2019 10:59 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
This story is more interesting than I thought. The characters are interesting and Naomi's tragic backstory was nice. Mary getting high with power while giantdespite being so timid at first was also fun. Perhaps Naomi can train her and keep her big as a sort of companion. And just where did that sizer tech come from? Seems like something the military would love to have to fight the giants themselves instead of making deals with them.
I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it. The size tech is going to be explained more in future chapters. I had the same questions too after I wrote about it! We will see some people try to get a hold of it in order to undo Naomi... but we'll see what happens.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2019 5:55 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi is truly a wonderful character, so big and powerful but there's some caring in there under the surface...just a little.
Author's Response:
Just a little! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 18 2019 3:40 PM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi seems like a very powerful person and yet she is still jealous of normal stuff. I think deep down she likes William too much and she secretly wants to spend as much time as possible with him.
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, exactly. She's lonely...but she's created some of these problems herself. Like an ironic tragedy. And I think she likes William too much as well, it's going to cloud her judgement on things for sure. Thank you for reading! Hope you continue to like what I write!
Date: December 18 2019 1:51 AM Title: High-Heel Workday
Naomi could trick mary into going through a portal but she doesnt realise shes giant because shes still indoors. Love these characters!
Author's Response:
That is one I hadn't thought of!
Date: December 18 2019 1:47 AM Title: High-Heel Workday
One of your best chapters! The detail in the entrapment scene was fantastic, i hope you come up with more chapters like it.
Naomi should torture Will by placing him around Mary's giant feet/shoes while she is grown and unaware
Author's Response:
Wow I'm glad to hear you liked this chapter! It was alot of fun to write. And yes, there will be more chapters like it for sure! Remember, he's still in her shoe, so there is still more to come on that. And the thought of Will being tiny at the unaware feet of his wife is an excellent idea and is in the outline a few chapters away. It's like you read my mind! Hopefully I can do it justice when it gets written. Thanks for reading!