Date: February 05 2020 3:53 PM Title: Naomi Begins
The story that keeps on giving. I love this chapter. Naomi's origin is wonderful, Simealtenously doing so much for the worldbuilding and even more for the characterization. The reason she is the way she is, is so organic its heartbreaking in a way. I love that character writing. Can't wait to see this continue!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I’m so glad you like it! This was a tricky chapter and I wasn’t sure people would like it, so thank you for the kind words.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 7:03 AM Title: Naomi Begins
This story already started interesting and is becoming more interesting. Nice to see the giantess has a backstory and you're doing a good job of continuously contemplating who I'm rooting for.
I'm looking forward to the next one and thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for liking it and leaving a comment! I don't even know who I'm rooting for half the time!
Date: December 07 2019 4:29 AM Title: Naomi Begins
Glad to see a new chapter of this! Great stuff, here's hoping a switch to the children's perspective and a later footwear scene with high heels.
Author's Response: Don’t worry! It’s coming! Thanks for liking it!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 1:07 AM Title: Naomi Begins
God I love Naomi so much!
Also nice to see a bit of her backstory/humanity etc.
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m glad you’re still liking it!