Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2019 5:11 PM Title: Mary's Revenge

This is quickly becoming one of my all time favs. One thing i think that works so well is despite Naomi's cruelty she's actualy been quite good to william and appreciative of his contributions to her business and pleasure. When Mary left she could have threatened or tortured him to give her up but merely persuaded him with facts and went to actually save Mary. In a certain sense you can argue Mary is actually a villian herself for leaving William in a situation she believed to be dangerous and leaving woth the kids to what dhe belived to be safety. She is certainly being corrupted by the poewr Naomi is giving her. I jusy hope William or the kids dont dont to suffer for her defying Naomi. You've done a great job giving each character some depth and inner goodness and badness. Cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you much! I really see Mary as a likable villain. I hope she stays that way but who knows what she’ll do...