[Report This]Date: August 14 2019 6:39 PM Title: Crushing Guilt
This is really a fun read. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Wow, another one of my favorite authors reveiwing my story! Thank you for your kind words, it really means alot coming from you. If you have any ideas or suggestions for the story, let me know. All of yours are masterpieces!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 11:53 PM Title: Crushing Guilt
It's rare to see a sympathetic giantess but very well done. Also Naomi is as awesome as ever.
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 4:34 AM Title: Crushing Guilt
Wow, quite a ride. Mary's perspective freshened it all up. Not gonna lie, though, you took a few shortcuts earlier, with the lawyer just being too lazy for instance. You could have sold that better. Still a great read.
Author's Response:
I am happy with how Mary's character has turned out. Hoping to keep it fresh with her. And yes, I agree about the shortcuts. I'm not very good at writing convinving or interesting dialogue so it is what it is I suppose. When I was first fleshing out the story from my outline, I didn't think that this story was going to have any depth to it, just a simple "formulaic" giantess story. But I'm still glad you liked it, that is awesome.
I am at a point where I'm unsure where to take the story now. I keep rewriting my outline but I'm not satisfied with it, so it might be a while before you see an update again. But please continue to give me your thoughts and perspective on things. I appreciate it.