I just finished your latest chapter and damn, Karen is a true milf. Also Derrick needs to man up and hit that. Overall, I can't wait to see what shee has up her sleeve.

Hmmm, freckles that seemingly move into her cleavage; lucky freckles or Karen's shrunken / transformed boob enthusiasts? 

Wow! What a start to a story! The sexy title is what brought me here and I’m glad I got to read the beginning of this little tale.

I used to read your stories years ago Jacksmith, but all I remember was that most of them were feet centered which was not my cup of tea. Therefore, I avoided pretty much all your stories with the feet tag and kinda wished I was into feet at some point.

Over the years, I have seen your stories pop up often on the trending/most recent page, and I just watch as the reviews climb up over and over again for many of your stories.

At the time, I knew that if I read it, I probably would enjoy the story, but I wouldn’t be aroused by it as such as other readers. You even had themes that I enjoyed. Family friends, teachers, boss at work, and so on. The stories and premises were very tempting, especially your catchy titles.

Sometimes I get excited when I see a new interesting title of a story pop up on the most recent page, and then I sigh with discontent after seeing your name. I got jealous of your fans, being able to see your stories update so frequently and satisfy their desires consistently. So, I just accepted that you would be that great writer that wrote stories which I wouldn’t enjoy......until now.....

As I said earlier, the title of this story convinced me to click on this. I didn’t even read who wrote this yet at the time I clicked. I finished reading this, got excited, and then I saw your name. For a few dreadful seconds, I remember seeing all the tags you had in your stories as I slowly clicked back to see the tags of this story. I saw there was no feet, but then I shook my head in disbelief. No way Jacksmith wrote a story without feet. So I checked again and sure enough, the story I never knew I wanted is finally here.

I’m not sure if I will enjoy the rest of this story since it’s already planned out as a commission, but I’m impressed with the first chapter. You are extraordinary with dialogue and have characters fit certain roles to make them more believable.

When you described Derrick’s character as this awkward shy guy who gets nervous around girls, I am completely sold on how you portray him. Same with Karen. The background you gave her by stating how she used to toy with men makes her conversation with Derrick much more convincing. We know she can handle an average Joe, which means she will feast on the opportunities she can use with Derrick.

I love the use of repeating letters to showcase a stutter, such as “S-sorry”. I could actually see him fumble his words as he trembles before the beautiful Karen.

On the other hand, Karen’s confidence shines in the second half of this chapter. She verbally teases him, with the “purring” you mentioned and later described the situation as a cat playing with its food. Lastly, the first form of physical contact was established by Karen preventing Derrick to escape. She grabbed his wrist, controlling the situation and also where Derrick is going to sit.

Then she suggests sharing her seat. What a cliffhanger! Nervous as he is, Derrick cannot refuse that offer and Karen will use that to her advantage. If Derrick finds some courage and says no, then I’m sure his mom will correct him and force him to be a good boy and sit with Karen. His mom also seems to enjoy the teasing and also seems to prioritize the fun for Karen over her own son. Allison doesn’t want Karen disappointed so I don’t see Derrick escaping this at all.

Now the question is how will they sit together? How will they be positioned? Personally, I would love to see Karen get up for a second and let Derrick lie down on his back, face up. Then Karen joins him, but she surprises him, by instead of sitting next to him, she decides to lay down on top of him. Her back on his chest. Her butt resting on his groin. She adjusts herself to find the perfect position, “accidentally” rubbing Derrick in the process. Derrick struggles for a bit, but Karen is in complete control and is able to keep Derrick’s skinny frame under her, much to her delight.

The way I believe it’s going to happen is Derrick lays down on top of Karen and uses her boobs as pillows. At one point, his head sinks in her cleavage and her boobs swallow up his head until it disappears, causing Karen and Allison to laugh.

Either way, I’m excited for what happens next and I’m still astonished that I’m actually reviewing a Jacksmith story. Hopefully this isn’t the last time I write one for you..

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. Yes, feet make a lot of appearances in my works, but this one really is just centered on Karen's cleavage, as well as her domination of Derrick. You haven't quite guessed their seating arrangement, but it should still be fun.