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Reviewer: thejoker2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Please finish! It was starting to become one of my favorite stories on here but there is no more!

Reviewer: Stanley Wlliams Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2007 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hope that Emily will get out of this situation and be restored.

Captivating and well written.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2007 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Alex clearly has more issue than a subway newstand. Because, I refuse to believe Emily was as bad as that, for real. And, the fact that I'm even doing this armchair psychoanalysis shows how convincingly you wrote this chapter!

Now, for a couple of cons. First; you keep alternating "Tina" with "Tiny." Is that how Emily mentally refers to Roger's second wife? Is she normally shorter than Emily?

Second; the correct term for a laryngitic-sounding voice is "hoarse."

NOT "Horace!" lol!

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