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Reviewer: Johnnyhavoc55 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is an incredible story. I would love to see more of it.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2019 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hmm. I love the concept and the use of the mom and the aunt. I like Cindy’s interest and how knowledgeable her mom is. It makes the conversations fun to read.

Susan is my favorite character in this story. I love her confidence and how she is in control of everything in her life. Being a slave to her probably means no escape since she probably knows how to keep her tinies trapped inside her.

While the thought of thousands of tinies stuck inside them sounds hot, I think I prefer a more intimate approach with just one tiny stuck inside. That way we can relate to that tiny. Cindy’s butt boy is a perfect example. Someone that we can be envious of. Would love to see Susan and the aunt have a favorite slave. (Maybe it’s the panty slave? I wish I was that guy.)

I also wrote a review on your “Tomgirl” story which I still think is your best story in my opinion. Would love to see that story continue. That next chapter might be my favorite of that tale.

Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, nice to hear from you.

A couple of things.  I had nothing to do the other night so I had a bunch of beers and shots, then wound up writing this.  You can probably tell by all the gramatical mistakes.  In essence this particular story is just an ongoing drinking game for me.

I was going to have them each with only a few tinies, but as you shall see as the story goes along the women are ageless, so a natural accumulation is occuring.  Will they keep their tinies?  Will they sell some off?  Will they just transform them into objects other women can use?  Will a mass prayer session happen between one of their legs? {he he, you bet}

As to my other stories, both "Tomgirl" and "French Weave" are still active, as has been my schedule, hence the lack of time to simply write them out.  "Tomgirl" is fun to write, whereas "French Weave" is in my opinion the better, more straightforward concept {though with only one chapter written and probably only one chapter to go, no one could tell that}.

Truth is I have several stories in the works, "Tinies For Sale" has a few chapters posted.  "Succubus Dominatrix", "Goth Pet Dog", "The Company", "Lady ? and Chastity Girl" {still working on the name for that one}, "Learning To Fly" are among possible future posts; and my creme de la creme "Battle Butt Babes" {I think is pretty darn decent}.

Thanks for the review, always great to hear from you.  Oh yeah, if you like the mother in "Tomgirl", you'll definitely like the night that is about to happen in her bedroom.

Reviewer: Giga_planet_eater Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2019 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd love to see a chapter or two dedicated to the power trips the mom or aunt get by having thousands or more tinies inside them.



Author's Response:

I was about to, then two things happened that delayed me in doing so. 

First, I wanted to see what animal transformation most people would want, even though I pretty much had that part of the story figured out, or so I thought.

Second, when I received no suggestions on the animal transformation, I was simply setting out the baseline for the transformation when an idea struck me, a joke actually.  I hope everyone gets a kick out of the joke.  I know Cindy's Aunt Susan will enjoy it, in a fashion that you might like I may add.

Thank you for the reply.

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2019 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's very good. I'd love to read more

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible, interesting concept.

Reviewer: Giga_planet_eater Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2019 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is amazing. Please continue.

I can't wait to see where this can go.

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